Alone

its always darkest before the dawn..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

the picture is not mine its a stock photo
but the words are my creation.


I feel so alone again
I feel so empty yet again
in this safe haven... sigh...

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

Words, in and of themselves, are simple manipulation of the vocal cords, clicks and ticks of syllables, a phonetic energy of the tongue coupled with a reasoning brain. But when words are chained together in a specific, articulate and powerful way, they bespeak a response unspoken, heartfelt, poignantly sad and touchingly beautiful... they create art.
You have done that here, with three simple lines and a photo. I bow, humbled...

[Pax]

wow, thank you for that great complement. I always love art. Im really honored by your review.

[Legolas]

Great job. There is so much meaning within just a few words.

[Pax]

Yup, im a fan short words...just like haiku...thanks

[Pax]

It is beautiful, and strong the way you know yourself. And it can get only better... write dear poet keep on writing.

E.L.

[Pax]

someday, sometime, soon. thanks

Yes... keep the faith in all what is beautiful. Then the light will glow.

[dark light]

strong and wise words. I like it

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the wise words and the good graphics, good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good use of words and thoughts. I like the use of the artwork to make your point. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Pax]

thank you, its always a pleasure to see your review.

[Renée]

You know WillyamPax..knowing our weakness..can be a strength ( ;

[Pax]

indeed ;) thanks.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

It's always amazed me how so few words can be so powerful and...emotional
This is great, keep it up!

[RachelReaper]

I used to be able to say the same thing, until I learned that all three of those are my enemy. I must say, this has definitely triggered some kind emotion in me, one that I'd like to forget I'd ever had, but awesome job. Because the point of poetry is to make the writer feel what you feel, or what you want them to see or feel.

[Pax]

I must say your right, all of them is the enemy, yet in some ways we let our enemy closer..thanks for a wonderful view in life's struggles. Im glad that you it triggered some emotions. thank you so much.

[Baby Ricochet]

THat's beautiful man. Loved it

[Pax]

thank You