Alone
A Poem by Pax
its always darkest before the dawn..
© 2014 Pax
Author's Note
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the picture is not mine its a stock photo
but the words are my creation.
I feel so alone again
I feel so empty yet again
in this safe haven... sigh...
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Words, in and of themselves, are simple manipulation of the vocal cords, clicks and ticks of syllables, a phonetic energy of the tongue coupled with a reasoning brain. But when words are chained together in a specific, articulate and powerful way, they bespeak a response unspoken, heartfelt, poignantly sad and touchingly beautiful... they create art.
You have done that here, with three simple lines and a photo. I bow, humbled...
Posted 12 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
wow, thank you for that great complement. I always love art. Im really honored by your review.
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12 Years Ago
Wow, thanks. It can be manage now...
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12 Years Ago
Thanks, greatly appreciated.
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12 Years Ago
i do want to...someday..sometime...soon...thanks,..
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12 Years Ago
i do...glad u like it and thank U.
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Added on April 2, 2012
Last Updated on January 26, 2014
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I am Willyam Pax from the Philippines and now residing here in Saudi Arabia for work. I am not a writer but a sensitive aspiring artist who expresses himself into .. more..
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