Alone

Alone

A Poem by Pax
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its always darkest before the dawn..

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© 2014 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
the picture is not mine its a stock photo
but the words are my creation.


I feel so alone again
I feel so empty yet again
in this safe haven... sigh...

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Words, in and of themselves, are simple manipulation of the vocal cords, clicks and ticks of syllables, a phonetic energy of the tongue coupled with a reasoning brain. But when words are chained together in a specific, articulate and powerful way, they bespeak a response unspoken, heartfelt, poignantly sad and touchingly beautiful... they create art.
You have done that here, with three simple lines and a photo. I bow, humbled...

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Pax

12 Years Ago

wow, thank you for that great complement. I always love art. Im really honored by your review.



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Dramatically expressed and artfully presented.
Usually, when someone craves solitude and lack of stimulation--and doesn't wish those conditions to be disturbed (by any "insecurity") that person is recovering from something.
If true, Will, I hope your recovery is quick and complete.
Creative little work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

Wow, thanks. It can be manage now...
Beautifully put, my friend... Couldn't be done better. The words have a lot more to them than what's written on the screen, I can tell. Powerful piece, great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So few words, but they paint such a hauntingly familiar picture. I know it well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The picture and the words speak of a stark reality. It's not something that would comfort anyone, that's for sure!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Haunting, enjoyed the contrast here, quite deep, liked this very much :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

Thanks, greatly appreciated.
What haunted words.
Short but very very very powerful ... filled with a very lonely kind of sadness.
Loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

thank U
I loved the way you did this! Dark as always though :( I hope one day you write a poem with that light bulb bright and shining. But of course, some of the most great writes comes from dark emotion. Very well done Willyam.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

i do want to...someday..sometime...soon...thanks,..
how depressingly insightful

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

thank You.
beautiful and powerful .....good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

thank You
Your words are beautifully said. Three small lines that speak volumes. Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

i do...glad u like it and thank U.

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Pax
Pax

CDO - the city of golden friendship, Philippines



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Dear Visitor Hello there! I am Willyam Pax from the Philippines and now residing here in Saudi Arabia for work. I am not a writer but a sensitive aspiring artist who expresses himself into .. more..

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