Alone

its always darkest before the dawn..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

the picture is not mine its a stock photo
but the words are my creation.


I feel so alone again
I feel so empty yet again
in this safe haven... sigh...

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

Words, in and of themselves, are simple manipulation of the vocal cords, clicks and ticks of syllables, a phonetic energy of the tongue coupled with a reasoning brain. But when words are chained together in a specific, articulate and powerful way, they bespeak a response unspoken, heartfelt, poignantly sad and touchingly beautiful... they create art.
You have done that here, with three simple lines and a photo. I bow, humbled...

[Pax]

wow, thank you for that great complement. I always love art. Im really honored by your review.

[BlackRose]

Artistic in its form. Don't need much everytime to say alot. It has lots of feeling. Short but to the point. Like they say (if I have this right) speak softly and carry a big stick. Superb!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

You are such a creative soul! Passion, silently laid out into words.

[Pax]

thank you, creativeness is really hard to follow but we do our best to cope up with it....

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful image mingled so perfectly with your profound thoughts. I have known this place too well.

[Pax]

thank you so much, its indeed personal and alot can relate.

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This is touching, sad, and poetically strong :)

[Pax]

thank you very much

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Artful presentation! Gentle yet, powerful ...sad yet, somehow stated without the feeling of self-pity. These are such true and heartfelt words, and they express so well what many of us have felt all too often. Great work, Willyam! And truly, the combination of your choice of picture and your words makes the sum greater than its parts - you are an artist and a beautiful soul.

[Pax]

thank you, sometimes im hesitant to call myself an artist..because i still have a long way to go. your words are a pleasure to read.

[MoriartyMesa]

The words can not be described.

[Maya Storm]

Thirteen words that speaks volumes about each and every one of us. We all say that we are different because of oh so many things, height, weight, age, race, beliefs... those words WillyamPax have shown why we are more alike than not.

We all feel insecure and the results of it is never for our own good. Being alone sometimes seems better, but after trying it for a while the mind deteriorates. Your words hold an incredible amounts of energy. You have penned well!

[Pax]

Thank You, Your words of are inspiring and true.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

I hope the dawn comes soon! A solitary existence is a hard thing to maintain for a long period without losing your sanity. Great writing, Willyam!

[Pax]

thank you so much my friend.

[emmajoy]

Three lines written yet a multitude of emotion behind them. Some of us would long to have such a skill - i certainly would. These are words to remember, sad though they are.

[Pax]

wow, that certainly is great number of emotions. Thank You.

[emmajoy]

smiling .. tis a great post.