Never in mine

In my muted life
Lady Luck came
to others whom
i Cherish
Never in mine

In my pause life
Stars shines
in their path
Never in mine

In my Blurred life
I remain stilled
Waiting for forever
That never came.

Author's Note

I feel like I am Making excuses. I was suppose to write about how lady luck always comes to those people around me and I on the other hand none came to me, it's not like I am bad in luck or having any bad serious situation. I know that if you want something you need to work hard for it. Even I when I work hard on it, it never came into perspective so I learned when to strike but most of the time I remained stilled, call it lazy but that's how I cope. My laziness and patience aline in life. Seems like I am making a blog on my authors note.. Thanks for reading...

The picture is a painting I never got to finish, oceanic sky in mixed media.

Reviews

[Androglossia]

This is kind of down in the dumps. As they always say, luck has a way of evaporating when you lean on it :) Some people get luck handed to them. It can happen to them that easy as if by divine intervention, or by a simple coincidence, but there are those who don’t get luck on a shiny platter. And then, as if written by the hand of a bad writer, very good things happen. As how those good philosophers put it, it takes only a split second for life to go horribly wrong or luckily right. There is no "never came" just "not yet". All a person needs to do is bridge that gap, again and again, until it comes.

Your words here is simple but they run deep showing pessimism and whatnot.

[Sami Khalil]

It is ok. No worries. If we try and fail, it is part and parcel of the learning process. Some make it easy, comes to them naturally...others have to struggle and work hard at it. At least you are honest with yourself and are not sugar-coating.

[Ayvid N]

Dear Pax,

Sometimes, life seems so lackluster and partial to us. I relate so much to your words. Having always been given the short end of the stick by Lady Luck, these words could be mine and I'm so glad you wrote them. Its amazing when poetry feels so relatable and comforting.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes we just don't finish that we start...there can be plenty of blame to go around...but if we give up or make excuses or just blame it on luck...aren't we dodging the real issues.
Oh, this poem makes us stop and think....good poetry does that.
j.