uncharted territory

I Sense your

 morning movement

 as you wrap

 your sweetest embrace

 into my cold heart

 bringing heat

 to my uncharted

 territory

 I surrender…

 

I rave at your arrival

 as you drain

 my pool of

 longing then

 satisfying

 my hunger

 forever

 I remember…

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Such a beautifully written short poem. One could feel the warmth you speak of. Tyfs

[Ruth]

Beautifully surrendered in poetry and heart here...truly lovely Pax...memories give warmth and a reason at times..this is so nicely woven in thought and tender expression :)

[Corset]

beautifully sensual and tastefully rendered wrapping us up in the warm glow of your writing this morning! :D

[Jimmy Yetts]

Intensely romantic; indeed, elegant eroticism.
Stunning portrayal.
Very nicely done, Pax!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very sensual without being blatant...this is like a figurative making love.
Makes for beautiful mornings and warm hearts with which to wake.
j.