Never Gone

A quote

I was never gone,
yet I was not even seen

Author's Note

How could you ever love me
If you still never see me.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

This little piece made me think more...
Yet I was not even seen"
The way to feel invisible to someone, or to a place, for a period of time...Is that a bad feeling or good?
Invisiblility doesnt mean being ignored, as it depends also on the person himself. (or?) Sometimes I want to be invisible in the crowds...And love cant depend on seeing, but on more complicated feelings...
Oh the question is do you want to be seen?

[PlayWrite]

the shortest poems say the most they say

[Weeping willow]

Transparent to life and the emotions that flow within it. These words speak to me in this way ;-} nicely expressed. ;-}

[Jimmy Yetts]

The loved feel noticed.
Wise words!

[Diamond]

Love this. Profound .
And such is the freedom it gives.

[FJ Davis]

Wretched way to feel.
One-way love is like that.

[Wondering Mind]

You never know, they sense you even if they don't see you... I know, because I sense them all.
Nicely penned, Pax.

[Kent Rawski]

Similar to the proverbial tree falling in the forest does it make a sound if no ones there to hear it

[Renée]

Oh Pax!
So much heartbreak in these few words. I think we’ve all feel this sometime in our lives.

[Franco]

Simple and effective. I like the vulnerable nature of this poem.

[Sami Khalil]

This poem tells me that love depends on seeing, on witnessing and on feeling the existence for broader terms. Like someone said, seeing is believing and you go further and say, seeing reality is loving. You are philosophical my dear friend.