Universe

In your palm, there’s a Universe

with your own time, and space

Life of a dream within the dream

An expansion to your ever changing heart

Living free to the inhabitants of the world

Cleanse from their darkly desires.

 

I simply marvel…

 

Author's Note

writing prompt #6
photo is take and edited by me (sole owner,hehe)

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I think the word "cleanse" in the write should be "clean" or "cleansed" to give the structure a coherent flow. I like the content and the message of freedom and innocence contained in the lines.

[Weeping willow]

Such few words that flow into a beautiful picture ;-]

[An owl on the moon]

Loving the words flowing, and your image glowing. Everything flows together into the most marvelous world.. magnificent.

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful poem, marvelous thoughts. You bring mystery out to marvel at. You send our imaginations soaring high. You make us live the dream.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Hi Pax! I love the sparkle and mystery of the photo...and your poem have the same feeling, deep, touching hidden strings in me, specially "cleanse from there darkly desires"
:)

[I Am Svetlana]

This was so incredibly beautiful and freeing to read...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even if on the outside things have become bleak...we can still have our own hope and heart deep inside. Yes.
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Both photo and poem radiate beauty.
Your deep thoughts, Pax, make for a most enjoyable read.