Dominion

Dominion

A Poem by Pax
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Your darkness becomes your cage
being imprisoned, you became the
 demon
on your own dominion.
Never seeing light, you succumb
to your inner needs. Then you
die as ugly truth littered all over
your pale blood.


Ending it all is where
you should rise,
 
never falling to the
needs of others,
you became the light
never fading, stronger than
you could ever be
you have to
 live,

again....

© 2019 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
https://www.instagram.com/p/BsYBQUGlhN6/

self-portrait, writing prompt #5

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battling our own darkness...and learning to live again....such a pertinent poem for so many of us who border on giving up....on succumbing to depression and loss of hope...

we need to break out of that prison...parole ourselves with light and positiveness...

nicely expressed here...a really good poem, Pax.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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One can feel the rising struggle between the despairing darkness and the living light. What a vivid, fierce walk through life, and living again.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful and wonderful poetry my friend.
"Never seeing light, you succumb
to your inner needs. Then you
die as ugly truth littered all over
your pale blood."
I did like the above lines. Made the reader understand the place. Thank you Pax for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

battling our own darkness...and learning to live again....such a pertinent poem for so many of us who border on giving up....on succumbing to depression and loss of hope...

we need to break out of that prison...parole ourselves with light and positiveness...

nicely expressed here...a really good poem, Pax.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We truly do become the demon of our own dominion. Well expressed, Pax.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Pax
Pax

CDO - the city of golden friendship, Philippines



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