Darkness iV

Darkness iV

A Chapter by Pax
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is there a hole
in this shadow 
of deep darkness,
so that
i can just crawl
myself into
and get out of
this mess.


© 2016 Pax


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A hard hole to find. Hard to know peace after knowing chaos. Powerful and wonderful words my friend. You used the language with great skill. Meaningful poetry written in so few lines.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


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A hard hole to find. Hard to know peace after knowing chaos. Powerful and wonderful words my friend. You used the language with great skill. Meaningful poetry written in so few lines.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A feeling I can certainly relate to.
Very well said, poet!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A small speck of light shines in every shadow my friend;-}

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is my tenure, for 10 years I have loved myself, because I just cant trust anyone else to do it better.
I like what WM said below, I hope you find it too.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey PAX! It only take a speck of light.. I hope you find it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 26, 2016
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Pax
Pax

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