Darkness I

My writings are my own darkness

my own little room

its a lonesome

space.

In here i crouch

and see the nothingness

as i drown myself 

in the stillness it brings

and the numbing 

silence

i surrender...

Author's Note

Raw emotion

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

We do have to find ourselves in light and darkness, in stillness and chaos. All are part of our learning and maturing experiences. Sometimes we retrieve what we lost and other times, we lose them forever. A dark but an excellent reflection, dear brother...:).......................

[Pax]

Ah, yes... you are as always very insightful and inspiring person ive meet and become a good brother. I've matured more here as i share my heart in writing. And those who understand, i cherished them much more as a family, yiu are one of them good brother, hugs...thank you with everything!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you. Big hugs....:)))))

[Coyote Poetry]

The sadness of the great writers. They were close to few. A lonely life, the writer's life. Powerful opening chapter my friend. I did like.
Coyote

[An owl on the moon]

There is a wonder and beauty even in the darkness of your soul, and you share with words and sacred silences. Thank you my friend.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Deeply felt and well expressed.
Surrendering to one's self is a victory.
Excellent bit of work, Pax!

[Pax]

Thank you, Jimmy...

[Weeping willow]

Very deep inside the shadows. I align within this write,Expression is good for you can sense what the meaning is within each word;-]

[Pax]

thank you for all the reviews, dear friend...

[Richard Klpatric]

It is poinate, it strikes the core of every writer what you are feeling is some thing we go through. Our work is to allow us to show others how we feel. The emotion is true and to the core. Believe you are worthy of the skill and the merit of being a writer. You are? Aren't you. Yes, you are. Believe.

[Pax]

Thank you.

[Richard Klpatric]

The only thing, you have do is believe in yourself. You are trying to allow us to see this? Who you are?

[Corset]

very raw, and we have all at one point felt this, which is why we reach out to each other as poets, we understand this silence, embrace it even at times, surrender...just remember to get up again, open the windows and take a deep breath, and surround yourself with quiet beauty...as you are a poem with wings.

[Pax]

you are beautiful as your words, dear friend... thank you.