Aww this one is sweet and sad at the same time. The sentence to have someone to depend on "once every so often" goes perfectly with your ending "I know I can live life well enough"...sounding as though it would be just enough to keep enough positive in your life so the negative doesn't totally swallow you up. I think we all need someone we can count on, to show us they care, to just think about us every so often; but to have someone with you constantly, as a partner, friend, lover....that's really a blessing :) You express yourself so well with your writing.
There is such a longing tenderness in your voice, my friend. The heart speaks out what it longs for, what it needs, what it feels will bring it completion. May your imagination be a seed that grows full.
Why be content with "once every often" when you can always have it? Just a thought. Perhaps, this is the author's way of saying that he is not expecting so much from anyone. I hope you're doin well pax :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
yes... I am a believer on a quote :"the higher your expectation the harder you'll fall" Thank you Ga.. read moreyes... I am a believer on a quote :"the higher your expectation the harder you'll fall" Thank you Gab...and I am doing well :)
Aww this one is sweet and sad at the same time. The sentence to have someone to depend on "once every so often" goes perfectly with your ending "I know I can live life well enough"...sounding as though it would be just enough to keep enough positive in your life so the negative doesn't totally swallow you up. I think we all need someone we can count on, to show us they care, to just think about us every so often; but to have someone with you constantly, as a partner, friend, lover....that's really a blessing :) You express yourself so well with your writing.
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