if ever ~

If ever there comes a day that I give up this life

I would never do it for selfishness or unreasonable emptiness

… I would give it for the sake of love.

 

If I ever think I am not loved or just felt worthless,

all I have to do is think of

    someone - a friend or family

        who truly cares, and then everything

   comes in perspective.

 

If ever I felt that I did nothing wrong

And then everything keeps falling apart

I just think that there will always be

-- a probable reasons on why things happen

I should not worry too much

because I know worrying takes too much

…energy and much of your time…

so why not let time slide and be patient

life is full of possibilities

it comes as it goes

be free from your own chains

and just live

for the betterment

     of who you are as a person…

              

Author's Note

I wrote this yesterday, just thinking and being possitively active on the things I am going through.

thanks for reading me...

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I`m sorry I just now read your great work...It`s really so full of hope and energy, of creativeness and new beginning! I like to read it again, it makes me fresh. It`s really wise, all your words are as if taken from the eastern philosophy, they sound in perfect way in my mind. I love this attitude to life, even everyone has its hardships, hard decisions ,cross-ways. But we are all humans, and have to keep ourselves strong, we are with high values and precious for God. I love these verses:

so why not let time slide and be patient
life is full of possibilities
it comes as it goes
be free from your own chains

:: nour ::
Oct. 23.

[John Anderson]

This is such a unique and beautifully inked poem.

[Pax]

Thank you so much my friend....

[Dhaye]

Oh, yes, dear brother. We shouldn't think that no one loves us...because there is no moment that our "Great Lover" would fail to love us.
This is also encouraging to love oneself.
Nice poem. I like your concept now unlike the other pieces before...
Keep it up, bro!

[Pax]

I said this again: Thank you pretty friend for the review and warm insights... I am trying to be possitive now, hopefully it rubs on my mortality that I still have everything in place ans still running good...

[Tania]

Such a positive and encouraging piece ...:)

[Pax]

thank you, beyourself... glad you think so, it is also a self reminder to me of sort...

[acidmonkey]

I found this to be very helpful but depending on the subject won't always work. I loved the layout, the form, the perspective. Great job.

[Pax]

my friend, thank you very much... and yes, I do believe it depends on the situation, yet it is just meant that we needed a little patience here and there and a little possitive thinking to keep up the challenges lifes throws at us... its a pleasure to read you thoughts about the matter, I am grateful always...

[ReneeJ]

Such a positive piece! I enjoyed the message you managed to weave into it, and you did it such a creative form, that it did not bore or sound to conventional. Great Piece!

[Pax]

thank you my friend, I am glad you find it creative, I am grateful with your comments...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

so why not let time slide and be patient
life is full of possibilities
it comes as it goes
be free from your own chains
and just live
for the betterment
of who you are as a person…
---
I would say those words there --- given the overture of the idea you're portraying in the lines...let it be...and just go with the flow of things...when you over think a problem(s) --- it tends to compound and become more than it is...positive thinking lets it --- simmer and the solution --- usually comes to mind...and goes away...get better...good to see your work...I did put a rather longer review of the term --- Happy...