Baggages

a ramdom thought, a re-edited shout-out. A quote.

 

Author's Note

Perhaps this is how we are as aspiring poets write our way through life and its challenging test.

I write not because I wanted to be a writer, but I write because I needed to release some unwanted feelings.

My words are my imaginings, but I can never deny that I sprinkles some parts of my emotions in it, some fragments my soul lays profoundly naked.

Reviews

[John]

I like the use different font and text size to make the piece more dramatically effective.

Just one grammatical point. Shouldn't it be 'baggage' (an uncountable noun) instead of 'baggages'. Perhaps you have good reason for breaking this rule, though I can't, having read the poem a couple of times, see why.

Thanks

[Marie]

Your words are very profound, and your poetry speaks to us all.

[Jesal Gohil]

My words in verses scream in profound ways..had an impact..loved it

[Sami Khalil]

In our denials, we sprinkle random thoughts. In our heavy loads, we carry pain and the past and in our journey of verses, we release wanted and unwanted emotions. We piece the fragments together into a new mosaic of naked challenges. An excellent sincere write. Talent and honesty defines you. Bravo my friend...:).................

[Sunny Lotus Eyes]

Nicely said, the words that talk...