Victim of broken rhythm

-unforseen lies, duality, right, wrong, denial,hurt

 

 

 

*  Victim of broken rhythm   *

 

The monster sees lies

Falls upon as it unties

 

Truth hides in unforeseen lies

 

Acting as if you’re the victim

Stories with broken rhythm

 

Like everything else is in duality

There will always be two sides of a story

 

Who’s wiser, who’s dumber

Who’s right, who’s wrong

Who’s blind all along

 

Bolder statement in dichotomy movement

What you say controverts of who you are

To whom you’ve hurt, you didn’t care

 

Falsifying or denying any claims

Shaming yourself is what you attain

Your pride is as good as lame

Author's Note

I just don’t like those who act as if their the victim, yet clearly they are denying what was done wrong.

Pardon me with my words above… these words are just expressions of what I see, I may or may not be wrong – it really depends on you. This is just my response on the news today. Too much this and that…

well, I just got fed-up with the feeds in the our local news…

Credits to the photos to:
monster
monster

Reviews

[Extant]

Raw truth makes some of the best poetry, I think something really touched on your nerves and you were seeing red as well as truth and lies. Unfortunately, it's all too often that evil is victimized but like you said, you may or may not be wrong because you don't have to feed into the stories other people tell.
Beautiful lines, Pax. Some wisdom to live by.

[Jack...]

Wow my friend...this one digs deep...burrowing for the truth that more than likey will result in lies sprinkled throughout, like confetti, pick the right color...

[Tennessee]

I agree. These people act as everyone is to blame but themselves. You made it easy to relate to as I think we all know those people, the people that feel sorry for themselves and so on. Good kid.

[Marie]

If people can feel victinized, they don't have to feel guilty.

[A. Amos]

Falsifying or denying any claims
Shaming yourself is what you attain
Your pride is as good as lame


Now this is seriously deep and sharply written, well done my friend.

[Pax]

Thank you my friend. I do try to be universal as possible. I am glad that you find it sharply written and deep as well...

[gabrielle]

Feisty vent, pax.

One of human weaknesses, which we don't normally admit, is that we sometime don't mean what we say. Now this piece is very timely as we are having some spectacle here regarding the alleged attempted rape committed by a local celebrity...well, everyone has their own opinion who is the real victim in there.. but anyways, these lines:

Who’s wiser, who’s dumber --- to ask this question seem in appropriate. A person may be wiser in some aspect but may not excel in other field. So i think that it would not be proper to label people as dumb.

Who’s right, who’s wrong--- i think being right or wrong is subjective depends on what are the values held by a person.

You are right pax. Whenever a person would controvert his statements, he loses his credibility. Well done.

[Pax]

thanks Gab... as keen as always my friend. Medyo na inis lng ako Gab, Feisty ba? :) iba iba kasi yung storya and ibat ibang batohan nang opinion...you know i always maintain balance in a matter of opinion so i put this poem in universal tone with deep wisdom to learn - not only for them but also for us... I so appreciate this keen review...

[Shep]

Why is it your Poems always touch me deeply?Another awesome poem to add to your collection.

[Pax]

perhaps its very close to home shep my friend. based on your experience, i am sure you have encounter this kind of people. Thank you so much...

[Shaquana Adams]

What you say controverts of who you are
To whom you’ve hurt, you didn’t care

Very nicely written. Great work :)

[Pax]

Thank you Shaq... I really appreciate this review :)