Forgiveness

~ a simple poem for a global christmas Collaboration.

 

 

Life may be a complicated mess

It may bring many unseen test

A presence of someone lost, says sorry

Forgiveness overflows is as sweet as merry

 

Author's Note

This is my second year to join the Christmas Collaboration manage by two finest poets in WC: Mr. Craig & Ms. Emma

I envite you to join my friends:
Collaboration details here

Credits to the photo:
hard times by Sir Douglas

Reviews

[gabrielle]

Forgiveness is something that we all need to heal our broken soul. Very inspiring pax.

Indeed, Christmas is time for forgiveness
So forget hurtful words that once been hurled
Like the birth of Christ in a humble place
It could spark light to a more peaceful world.

Merry Christmas in advance!

[Pax]

Merry Christmas din sayo... :)

I like that reponsive poem, thank you. Well expressed and true. I missed the shining lights of christmas there sa atin, iba talaga kay sa dito, they don't spend Christmas here or even new year, that is why its my another cold holiday season. I appreciate you always Gab.

[Arsalan Kouser]

This poem was short, but sweet. Short, yet deeply meaningful. Forgiveness is what many of us need to do...forgive others, and, more importantly, ourselves. Great poem.

[Pax]

so true, thank you my friend. I really appreciate this. :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for highlighting the need to forgive in your poem. It does clear blocked emotions.

[Pax]

Thank you much, ms. Praveeta. I appreciate your truthful fact, an insights really valuable .

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[Half Dream]

This is very beautiful. Simple and short yet full of meanings. Awesome ink. :)

[Pax]

thank you so much miss. Halfdream.

[Half Dream]

You're welcome Pax. :)

[Shep]

Forgiveness is always mess for me. More so for family.

[Pax]

thank you my friend. I am sure someday my friend, someday somehow you'll be able to forgive.

[The dark story]

"To err is human,to forgive is divine"…forget and forgiveness are the one on whose wheels our life runs. Life has got its own adversities and days of triumph…it hurts us sometimes or somebody hurts us sometimes but if we can forgive the one who truly apologies…then only we can stand stall before others.

I agree with gabrielle as well. Many thanks for sharing this piece.

[Pax]

Hello there my friend, Thank you so much for this. I agree with you too. Even though sometimes its hard to forget, some scars are takes more time to heal. but we do forgive and eventually forget it in time when our hearts are not as broken as they in the past. I really appreciate you coming by my friend.

[The dark story]

Time is a healer as well as a giver. It depends on us how we deal with it. And it is true that time does heal some ferocious wounds yet their scars are left behind.
Always a pleasure to read your work.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I do not understand why forgiving is so hard to do, maybe time passes by and we forget to fix what's broken...
It is indeed a gift to bestow.... we must cherish one another.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful message, Paxy!~xoxo~

[Pax]

hugs to you... i know its really hard my friend, letting go is the hardest step in the road to forgiveness... most of the time it takes more than a day or a year to forget the feelings that once you've learned to love. When you love a person or a family member so much, you must learned how to let them go, because you'll know deep within you they will find their way back in time for forgiveness and second chance if love is pure as its true. thank you very much dear friend...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

They say, "Patience is a virtue".... I'm beginning to believe that...
I love your reflective thoughts, Paxy. xx

[Corset]

it's perfect Paxie. :) a perfect Christmas gift for everyone.

[Pax]

Hugs, Thanks dear star, Advance Merry Christmas my friend... It's always good to see you...

[Corset]

To you too! :)

[Dhaye]

Only forgiveness can offer peace and joy to one's heart. It's a merry, merry Christmas if you don't have any misunderstanding with others in this season.
Advance Merry Christmas, Pax!

[Pax]

Advance Merry Christmas din sayo pretty friend... Learning to forgive the person, is the best gift you could offer to a person in this season. Thank you pretty friend...

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.

[Marie]

"As sweet as merry..." What a wonderful line...!

[Pax]

I love that line too, it makes me think of a happy christmas.... thank you so much my friend and advance Merry Christmas...