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silent screams #3

silent screams #3

A Poem by Pax
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* part 3

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How can I shut the silent screams of my mind?

 

It stings my heart when my mind shouts its frustrations

He says the world is a crazy place

I say, I just needed to find the right kind of pace for my taste

To run my own race.

 

I can’t stop myself from running away

I can’t even find a place for me to stay

Like they say:

“There is no such thing as permanent”

Yet my core yearns for that everlasting moment.

 

The shouts blast me in many, many lives I see,

Deep within these walls my mind could foresee.

Nothing more but a fantasy.

 

I just wish you could see

How my mind screams its plea.

 

© 2014 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
credits to the photo used to:
secrets we keep by manuelestheim


a series of the heart & Mind:
1. ) Heavy Hear #1
2. ) Vast Space #2
3. ) Silent Scream #3
4. ) ~ Land of Poets ~

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Your mind may scream but your soul is such a gentle permanence. I wish you could hear what many of us feel and see when we read your words...decipher your thoughts. With your words and the images you place along with them, I am able to stand upon the edge without fear of falling deep into the abyss. Even, in some instances diving into the dark with adoration for such a great ambassador as yourself to guide me through without a mark.I am then able to return to my own light being able to understand the plight of my fellow man and brother better than ever before ...so, thank you wise and gentle being! My wish for you in this season is peace, joy, and a thousand HUGS!

Posted 10 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Pax

10 Years Ago

If I am a phoenix, I would die every day, just to be renewed the next day. Yet I don’t want that,.. read more
Gypsy Warrior Queen

10 Years Ago

Oh, thank you for sharing and my ear is always open!I have lost alot of my family and so I know of t.. read more



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Yea .. this #3 series is very nice and the imagery`s outstanding with your equivalent words. I like the concept and the theme you created with your mind. Beautiful poem ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Looove this too of course. FAB with the awesome way to end it all with this clever last line. If only those could hear. They could listen and we hope they fix the damage and stop the running of the nonsense noise. :o/

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Truly remarkable piece, your style in writing still embedded in this piece. Love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

10 Years Ago

thank you Marc... its really nice to see you around.. :)
You invite your readers deep into your mind, what kind of fight is going on between you and your mind. The expression of feelings you define is dark yet very powerful. I congrats you my friend for job very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

10 Years Ago

thank you so much my friend.
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome
I like how you use the opening question to set up the rest of the poem. Cool rhyme scheme. Also, the image paired up with it is perfect. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

10 Years Ago

Thank you again Chris...
I can totally relate to this .. i feel that my soul cries and shouts so loud,but my face still laugh ,i might be laughing from sorrow ,but yes i do still want to shut the srceams of my mind..that was amazing Pax :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

10 Years Ago

i can relate to that, in class if i don't write i express them in doodles...but then again my doodle.. read more
stars are far

10 Years Ago

hehehehe...yeah thats better :) and writting have soul ,words have soul
Pax

10 Years Ago

they do, before i thought they are just words, words on paper - no depth, no meaning, but now i see .. read more
“There is no such thing as permanent”
Yet my core yearns for that everlasting moment.

I understand the words in my interpretation between the lines of the words. Great work.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! what a outstanding thing you bring out from your past of your life As I read in your biography that you write about your life I fully understand your life by this piece of poem and I want to become your friend

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

10 Years Ago

you are amazing, thank you... sure I'll be glad to be your friend...
Silent screams, are often the loudest screams ever.... it's like a "white noise" of the television, that blurs infront of your eyes, on a late night, when you finished watching TV. If you stare long enough at it, you will see signs things, and hear even things, how weird that may sound.

The ears, of a human being are like this, they have internal "noise". like a sea shell... (once put to your ear).

You're such a receiving soul brother, a sensitive receiving precious soul, who just feels all, attaches all, and has a hard time to bring it in words, but then he paints, and then he writes, on moments when it comes through... and he should do it forever. Because, when you do, there is a revelation.....
Another brilliant piece little bro, fantastically written.

- Big Sis Eli xx


Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Hahaha so nice!!! I'm a tea lover, I would have tea even on my grave lol...... "peole could write th.. read more
Pax

10 Years Ago

haha, we are in gray period but we are not dead, pretend dead perhaps :D... hehe

10 Years Ago

Hahahahahhahhaa ;)
Sweet, dark, but yet truthful poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

10 Years Ago

hey my friend, its really nice to see you, thank you for this warm review and hope your doing well.... read more

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