vast space #2

~ part 2

 

 

 

Why is there too much space in such small place?

The mind is a tricky case.

 

Another blurry face in the mirror,

I have lost my sight of my latent exterior.

 

Can’t sleep,

Rules of a healthy life I can’t even keep.

 

Staring beyond, seeing many sides of me I can’t even reach.

Pouring my knowledge, yet I can’t even see myself to teach.

A probable barrier that is hard to breach.

 

Still I am willing to try

…

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Author's Note

photo credits:
Week 28 All this waiting
by : manuelestheim

a series of the heart & Mind:
1. ) Heavy Hear #1
2. ) Vast Space #2
3. ) Silent Scream #3
4. ) ~ Land of Poets ~

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Wow ... I think this poem`s came from the writer`s block of your life. I like the statement, "Why is there too much space in such small place?" Wow ... it`s really a very generous line having much questions and emotions as well in itself finding a way to get rid of the "same word -- UNCERTAINTIES" .. Beautiful poem, I just love reading your work ;)

[Pax]

I am so glad you are reading all the series my Wordsmith friend, I can't thank you enough... everything are connected to my heart, mind, soul and to my writings... I am grateful!

[BlackRose]

Looove this. Sucking the life out ones existence. Suffocating from such foul air. Fantastic read and well descriptive of poured emotions. :o)

[Pax]

Oh claustrophobic reality. Too much (N) Nitrogen, instead of Oxygen O2...
This feels suffocated, bedazzled, overwhelmed.

"Rules of a healthy life I can't keep."
There are no rules to a healthy life, I think... there are rules,
only by people who made them, but to listen to body and soul
is personal.... ;) there you go.... I think you know exactly what you
want and need brother....

Painting, creativity, poetry, people, family, trust, love, :) and these are there.
Each time you try, each time I came by..... :D

One love!

- Sis

[Pax]

thank you much, oh... my own rules are the hardest to keep, sometimes I indulges so much, not good, that is why I need my balance from time to time... oh, i really do need them:"Painting, creativity, poetry, people, family, trust, love"... you knew me so well big sis... sigh... someday, soon...

Balance is the true key.... I keep on saying it. :) things get better, when you do the opposite, for a while. Hugggggs big ones! xx

P.s. yes, someday soon!!!!!

[Shep]

I know what's it like you can't sleep. Another great poem.

[Pax]

When I don't work, I'm wide awake at time, specially when I am not tired, the mind is on overdrive. Thanks my friend.

[Ency Bearis]

An inspiring poem well presented, an uplifting thought at the end. Well penned with rhyme scheme

[Pax]

Thank your so much, Sir Ency....

[Ency Bearis]

You're welcome

[gabrielle]

The question on the first line made me think. Perhaps, recognizing that there’s too much space in such a small place is an admission that we have not yet make use/seize all the available opportunities for us. The rhyme scheme is great. The ending is positive and that’s what I like most.

[Pax]

Hello Gab, how are you, hope you’re doing good. Thank you, this series to me, all starts with a question. Questions that our heart and mind ponders. You are so right, the beauty of poetry is that, it’s open to many interpretation but every interpretation always connects to myself, somehow it always comes back to where’s the real meaning. I guess what I meant is that all interpretation is connected to me. And I believed you got the point on this. I am always grateful to you my friend. Be well…

[gabrielle]

welcome pax. i did not realize that the series all starts with a question. i hope you are well, too.

[Sami Khalil]

The world wants us to fit in spaces and mazes but our imagination which is infinite along with our spirits want to soar and fly away to touch and be with the infinite. We came from the infinite eternity and will will go back to it. This world is just a transitory stage ...An excellent write...:)...............

[Pax]

Hi Sami, it’s been awhile, thank you for this. You know I always appreciate you and your philosophical thoughts and friendship. Indeed, the space of the mind is as vast as the world. We can go to many places with just our imagination. Be well my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true ...You are always welcome...:)..................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if we think and reason outside the box, there will always be enough space...and we won't feel overcrowded or penned in...
it's about not letting our space dictate who we are or what we know about others or ourselves.

[Marie]

If we shrik to fit our spaces, there will always be too much around us. We must overgrow our boundaries.