the drug that cured me

 

W: “Do you feel it? the cold that surrounds us.”

 

M: “No! The Damp wetness is nothing compared to your warmth.”

 

W: “I hear your heart beat fast beating.”

 

M: “It beast for you, my love in tune with the reality with you in my arms.”

 

W: “I can’t contained the beating  of my heart that set a beat of ecstasy with you around so close to me.”

 

M: “Me too, You are the drug that cured my long time disease.”

 

Author's Note

photo credits to:
deepinswim

Reviews

[Dhaye]

*Redundant: The Damp wetness--------damp mean SLIGHT WETNESS already. It's either you use Damp or slight wetness

*Another redundancy: I hear your heart beat fast beating-----heart beat then fast beating? It's either heart's fast beating or fast heartbeat.

*It beast for you------what's BEAST? Is it BEST? "It's best for you..."

*I can’t contained------ can't contain (can't cannot be paired to a verb in the past tense)

*Me too, You are--------- you are...lowercase y


I love the choice of the image. So apt for the dialogue. So, I see...this book is a series of events presented differently. Nice concept (for the book).

[Pax]

thank you so much, pretty friend, I didn't see all the typos and redundancy, I'll correct that... much appreciated!

Yup, that's the concept of this book, it is just series of moments between lovers.

[Shep]

I think i understand now The W means woman and the M means Man. Awesome write. Such a spiritual awaking.

[Pax]

Intertwined feeling the passionate heartbeats.... sigh, I love your title into this one,

Love, and especially real love, can be a drug, totally, that's why they call it sometimes, being love-drunk.

So beautiful, it says all, what is needed. Perfection bro xoxo :)

- Elisa

[Pax]

being love-drunk is an awesome feeling... thanks big sis, I really do appreciate all the reviews... big hugs!

It is so good.... if I ever where an alcoholic, lol it would be from love...... ;) love you bigger ones!

*were sorry, I'm tired............... typo :)

[Pax]

:D typo's are my thing too, I understand you well, prince and princess of typos, were the royalties of typos errors...lol, so glad that your feeling well now and here in wc...

Exactly lol, thank the universe for being us, and not neurotic..... I love it. :) xx I'm so glad too, and have missed you muchly! hugs!!!

[gabrielle]

W: “Do you feel it? the cold that surrounds us.”
M: “No! The Damp wetness is nothing compared to your warmth.”--- or in short she's like a drier, heater or a human blanket (lol)
xxx
M: “Me too, You are the drug that cured my long time disease.” --- prescription or over the counter drug? (hehehe).

Forgive my "seemingly not serious" comments, kabayan. it's seldom that i see/read pieces like these from you and i had fun reading it. =)

[Pax]

LOL, mas gusto ko ata yung over the counter drug...hahaha...
alam mo ba basta when passion is at high, human temperature gets high then...LOL but there some truth in it..hehehe

I don't the humor Gab, I love jokes... and your very wise in seeing humor in every serious matter... :) thank you...