forever falling

 

 

 

 W: “You look at me as if I run your world.”

 

M: “You are my world.”

 

W: “Why me? I am just the lonely girl in this emptied forest with just a light at hand.”

 

M: “Exactly! All I need is you, this emptied forest and the light in your hand. It starts with you and our love will fuel the light in your hands that will shine throughout the forest making this place not so empty anymore.”

 

M: “Please don’t cry.”

 

W: “It’s been so long, being emptied for far too long seems like its yesterday. I am afraid I fall hard and died an instant as my first love - It left me broken in so many ways that I feel dead all the time. I am afraid you’ll do the same.”

 

M: “I am not perfect, my love. But you filled the void that I am trying to hide. You put a closed to it and make a very deep hole in my heart. An endless pit to keep me falling infinitely. I don’t mind forever falling as long as it’s you, forever is nothing, Infinity is nothing compared to my love for you.”

Author's Note

photo credits to:
martasyrko

Reviews

[David Scott]

A love story...
We have all lived in this isolated forest at times I think.
I had a funny thought as I was reading, "Please don't cry." I have only once been in a relationship where I enjoyed the tears. Both from her eyes and mine. Not in a Sadistic way, but because I knew I was safe to cry and she could handle those tears without judgment or without feeling bad. She let me have my pain and did not try to make it about her or make me feel like I should not sorrow. It was pure acceptance! I was able to give her the same... It was a heavenly place to cry within the safety of her love. I still do not understand it.
Well, you got the mind working. Ha.
I do think love is an infinite blessing. I hope you have found it.

[Pax]

Thank you very much mr. David. To cry is good to ease some tensions and burdens we feel from time to time. I am sure with that experienced you had, you had found a good friend, who always listen...

[Shep]

Nice to see you writing again besides poems, excellent first chapter. Question Who is M and Who is W?

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Passion takes over the forest and is possibly as large as the largest forest, a great piece.

[Pax]

yes, indeed. Thanks my friend. I so appreciate this.

[Pax]

W is to M, a perfect lover, Wow bro, I didn't knew you had this romantic side, lol, I just am amazed of your quality here.... they so fullfil eachother, it's amazing....I just am amazed how I love this "W" person, is it secretly you? bro? :) what a fantastic start, cant' wait to read further, when I get back from my thingy's here.... you're the writer of new breathing.... love love love it!!! :) xx

- Elisa

[Pax]

smiles, it was a quick write straight from the feelings of the moment yesterday...
Perhaps I was feeling hopelessly romantic yesterday..lol..
both are fiction, yet I am secretly hoping I am 'M'.... hehe
thank you so much... I so appreciate you came by big sis... hugs!

Ohhhh I'm happy you felt that way..... dear, it's the best feeling :) lol I know all about it he he....

I hope you and M... too ;) I pray for it lovely one. Always lil sweetheart of mine, you know, when I am back I never forget you, you're my treasure!!! HUGS!

[Pax]

me too, me too... a worthy treasure...

I love to hear you this way sweetie, I am happy when you're happy too :)))))

[Dhaye]

Paka-romantic naman ngayon ha? Nice nice, bro. Different concept...unlike me, I'm so hooked in only one subject today, but still I'm making twists... different stories under the rain. Hehe

I like this one.

[Pax]

Thanks pretty friend...

[MOON]

Romance, lovely write Pax , enjoyed the sentiments.

[Pax]

hi Moon, its nice to see you... thank you so much... I delighted you visit...

[Androglossia]

Why, all of these writes to me are almost maudlin. It's probably winter blues, Pax. Di ba winter na dyaan ngayon? I believe the weather and seasons have a significant impact on our emotions. Writing gushy poetry is nothing to be ashamed of and it's even a lot more comforting:)

[Pax]

smiles, almost Perhaps I really do missed home na... at nandito pa ako wala pang planong umuwi... segoro may early signs of winter na kasi... malamig na ang pang paligo ko at wala paring heater... hehehe...

gushy makes me feel nice... perhaps to keep my homesickness away... nakakahiya mang aminin medyo romantic in nature ako.. kunti lng... :D

[Pax]

thank you so much Idol...

[Androglossia]

True, ako nga rin nag ga-gushy din pag may time:) Di ba pansin mo rin yong mga gushy poetry ko. Kasi nga they also make me feel nice.

[Pax]

hahaha, pag may time, but yung time mo ata seasonal... hehe..
napansin ko nga eh, mas gushy pa yung sayo.. :)

[gabrielle]

overwhelmingly romantic pax. ...^__^...

[Pax]

.... that's also a huge compliment Gab... super...this first chapter is one of my favorite... thanks you so much...

[Caradoc]

Damn, Pax. I didn't know you could write romance like this. This is awesome, an entire scene in nothing but dialogue. With no description text, just two characters talking to each other, you managed to paint the entire picture. That's skill right there.

Bravo.

-Caradoc

[Pax]

wow, that's really a huge compliment my friend...

sometimes my friend, our writes can carry us all the way deep into that feeling, in that moment, a pause to dreamy scene of a lovely feeling... its like every second never counts... smiles...

thank you so much, you reading this brings light that i can truly write...
I'm grateful ~

[Caradoc]

Reading this was a pleasure and a delight. You are always welcome.