A reflection of movement

 

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I like the headline so much! Reflection of movement can give me so many associations and thoughts! your poem is remarkable, with great lines, and rhymes! Really instead to "talk" or do something worse, if we have deep pain inside, the better way is always creativity, where the good and bad emotions could complete mission and empty our broken hearts... Whatever we regret in life, is something which we choose, after that our way is not going back again, but we will come again to the same test one day! I love the positive end of that piece : "to bear a better seed of the contended tomorrow".

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[Pax]

your as insightful as ever my dear friend...hugs...
hope your doing good...
and yes, processing those negative energies towards creativity is another way in handling pain...
thank you, my dear friend..

[Neon]

What an adorable poem ... i liked the poem, the structure .. and the great implementation of words at the right place. Good work.

[Adriana C.]

love the message it contains , great writting ! i love this .

[Pax]

thank you, ms. A... :)

[Adriana C.]

no problem Pax :)

[gabrielle]

i've been reading your works for quite some time and i noticed recurring theme of your pieces. i like those but this one is what i love best because of the last two lines- simply beautiful. yes, life doesn't stop on a broken path or there may be some concrete blocks before us but we're like the flood water, we find our way either towards the sea or to a bigger body of water or we choose to stay back and be a mud puddle.

[Pax]

ahh, my favorite doc,LOL(kidding)... thanks, I knew it you'll notice the similarity... i have been noticing some of my works falls with the same problem, perhaps i am not still over it or i haven't found any answers to all of my questions in life and in my situations... thanks gab, you know me well...

[Tate Morgan]

A great write great ideas expressed here Remorse . Well presented as well I miss hearing from you friend

[Pax]

oh, my friend mr. Tate... thank you... yeah i am being here less now a days, but i am slowly catching up... i appreciate your thoughts...

[asdarkeyesclose]

' Because life doesn't stop on a broken path'

such a profound line and so very true, although at times it may feel as if it does stop, but the message here is we have to move on, we have to break through the difficult times and create something better. I enjoyed this a lot. fantastic.

[Pax]

thanks my friend... I am glad you enjoyed the poem...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"Because life doesn't stop on a broken path, we can create more to bear a better seed of the contented tomorrow."
Like what I've said to you, it seems that now you have these motivating words I have to hear. Life is a cycle. Sometimes in my life, I have become someone who give advices to people...encourage and motivate them to live a happy life. Now that I am falling into this "shady" part, I know that someone or some people are there to lift me up.

This piece is very uplifting. Perhaps in those times that you stayed quiet, you have that realization which now you want to share with those who need to be enlightened. Thank you so much for this, Pax. This is now one of my favorites from you, I must say. Thanks again, pare ko.

[Pax]

thank you pretty Dhaye...
your insight is awesome!

[emmajoy]

These are calm, contented words aimed, I think, at guiding other people, not just writers, but anyone who passes by. Consequently, you've created a precious gift, Pax. Many thanks for my share of it!

[Pax]

Ms. Em's my friend... your words is a gift to me as well... thank you :)

[Inspiring Writer]

Wow, what a creative write you've written. Great job.

[Pax]

thank you my friend... it's always a pleasure to see you and come by... then read my works...
i am grateful with that!

[Wolfwind]

I've come to the conclusion that you need to go back in time. Perhaps 10000 years and inscribe these priceless jewels of wisdom upon stone tablets... then mankind can come across them and they would be reveared and become prophetic teachings unto the world!

This was beautiful in many ways. It was deeply spiritual, it had the flow that leaves you entranced and in thought and it left you feeling like your mind and heart had been opened up into something new, even though one knows in their heart, that they are true.

Great Ink! Sir Pax!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Pax]

I thank you greatly my friend...
our words comes from our heart, with experienced and creativity... i owe my inspirations...
like the way your words inspired many...
I always appreciate your beautiful words mr. A...