I became the joke

I became the joke

A Poem by Pax
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- just a release, wanting to expressed this sad disbelief i suffer often times...

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I started to be jolly then I became the joke, I get used to it somehow - but often times I felt the sting that I am the sore loser in the end…

 

Tired, but not wanting to lose the happy façade I pretend - for I don’t want to rub disbelief to anyone whose life is content.

© 2013 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
I'll be hiding this soon...this is quite personal...

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Life is like the ocean, full of different currents and debris and fish in the sea. Yet, one thing is a truth within the wild blue.... we all are swimming in it too. So even when the storms keep up the surf, and spray and salt gets in the eyes. Just remember you've got friends, who shall shelter the cries.

I'm sure that what ever it is that has inspiried these four lines that you have writen, will, like the winds and clouds...blow on by.

Aaron =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

your words are like poetry itself mr. A...
thank you so much...
Like the wind, often ti.. read more



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No need to hide when you can play the fool with intent. Excellent read and write, Pax.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

your words are so short but so profound... thank you my friend...
Brandon S. Whitten

11 Years Ago

You are welcome, Pax
" I am not a writer but a sensitive (trying hard)artist who expresses himself ." Quite so. You express yourself clearly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

thank you my friend... :)
Mehak Mushtaq

11 Years Ago

Anytime. :)
Wow. thank you for sharing this personal and confessional type poem. We all hide behind happy facades but deep within we are suffering or hurting even losing battles. We have other weapons at our disposals as humans to fight these things so I hope we can use them.
Good to see you back Mr. Pax...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

my friend Mr. Sami... you always gives me a good reason why i must have strength, thank you so much .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Most welcome...:)

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