MOST LONELIEST

~ i SaY:

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SOMEONE WHO ALWAYS SHOWS THEIR HAPPY SIDE TO PEOPLE IS THE MOST LONELIEST 

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Author's Note

a quote

Reviews

[Sir Joe]

I'm wondering what kind of poetry this is.
Can you give some concrete justifications proving that the group of words above can be called a poem?
I'm just interested in making some poems of this kind.
=)
Be it proven by you that this is another kind of poetry, you might as well be considered as its pioneer here on writerscfe.org.
=)
By the way, you may also consider changing the word "their" to another pronoun which is "his" so it could agree with its antecedent, "someone".
I might not also be the only person wondering about the redundancy in the title. Could you enlighten our minds regarding this?


- joe

[kublakhan27]

Have you ever read the poem Richard Cory by E.A. Robinson? It speaks volumes to the sentiment you've expressed here...I think you'd sympathize with it...

[Pax]

no, i never heard of him.... i think human nature is a cycle my friend... that is why sometimes i feel here that i am not so alone on my struggles... grateful with your support :D

[Pax]

thank you

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I tend to steer away from statements with general application, which is why I admire people who do write them, a real thought provoker

[Pax]

thank you greatly my friend...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

You are welcome, what I especially liked about it, is that I did not entirely agree with your premise, ( became busy thing aut the alternatives) which is always a worthy mind boggler :)

[Ency Bearis]

A meaningful quote with such contrast, nice one.

[Pax]

Maraming Salamat! ~

[Ency Bearis]

Walang anoman, you're always welcome.

[Siddhartha]

And the saddest... Well Put Pax...

[Pax]

thank you Sid, yes indeed!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This is true, because behind of that smile, the pain solidfy in the poor man's soul. Thanks for sharing Pax.

[Pax]

thanks kabayan. It's a pleasure to hear your thoughts about it... Grateful!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome Pax :) enjoy your work always.

[Rob Santana]

WOW! This is so true, I totally agree. I love one liners, they can be so powerful. Well thought out Pax.

[Pax]

thank you my friend... your amazement brings such pleasure to my writings... grateful with that!

[emmajoy]

Perhaps, sometimes.. we're all lonely in our skin. But, sharing smiles is happy.making.
Your words so often nudge the reader to think past the letters.

[Pax]

:) ~ ms. Em's it's always a pleasure to see you reading my work....
"sharing smiles is happy.making." ~ that's better understanding than someone hiding on a happy face... great insight!

[emmajoy]

Always a pleasure to read your work, must try to read more, more often. Happy hours. :)

[Marie]

That must be me...

[Pax]

I'm glad you can relate to it's sadness Marie my friend... I am always grateful with your honesty and review...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I have to say this is definitely profound. One must look past the smile, deep into the eyes. This is where the soul is.........love this.

[Pax]

thank you very much my friend... :)