MOST LONELIEST

~ i SaY:

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SOMEONE WHO ALWAYS SHOWS THEIR HAPPY SIDE TO PEOPLE IS THE MOST LONELIEST 

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Author's Note

a quote

Reviews

[Sir Joe]

I'm wondering what kind of poetry this is.
Can you give some concrete justifications proving that the group of words above can be called a poem?
I'm just interested in making some poems of this kind.
=)
Be it proven by you that this is another kind of poetry, you might as well be considered as its pioneer here on writerscfe.org.
=)
By the way, you may also consider changing the word "their" to another pronoun which is "his" so it could agree with its antecedent, "someone".
I might not also be the only person wondering about the redundancy in the title. Could you enlighten our minds regarding this?


- joe

[NeiL ArandA]

I agree Pax..
" Its one thing to feel the sting of loneliness and another to smell the stench of indifference "
To avoid all this - we put up a happy face .

[Pax]

That's so true. Thank you my friend.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

So TRUTH, my admiration for this quote! I noticed that always, the same as the clown is so sad, when he is alone...

-nour-
april-013

[Deuces]

So, so, so, so very true!

[Pax]

thanks my friend...

[Wórdsmíth]

I liked this lovely quote, yeah, that's true...it's nice quote man, it's deep, appropriate.
you know what, i'm recently done with my work "truth's alive", and i saw your review on this too, i think this's your best quote man...i converted into poem and you converted into quotation, but i think our thought's're same what we wanna say... you got me man.
i liked your work...
it's a true line, well written.
again, you've fluttered me, it's really a good one.

[Pax]

many thanks my friend...

[Wondering Mind]

yep, can relate...I've known many

[Pax]

thanks, always my friend....

[Shep]

Never truer words spoken.

[Pax]

thank you my friend..

[gabrielle]

nice quote kabayan.
i think that they are also one of the strongest. Showing their happy side to others does not necessarily mean that they are pretentious or fake- maybe, they just don't want others to worry for them.

[Pax]

yes very true ~ thank you very much... i guess your enjoying your vacation... see you around kabayan...grateful with your words of wisdom :)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

It's incredibly lonely, I imagine. Always forcing yourself to appear happy for some one else's benefit... yikes!

[Pax]

well i got used to it in some way or another... it’s easy to pretend when your used to it... some people doesn't really care, but someone has a deep connection to you will always see the smile you pretend… thank you very much for the review my friend...

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-Smith]

No problem. I hope you have someone that can see through the smile.

[Lonely Islander]

I huess sometimes you get used to the smile and dont feel that it is fake anymore. A great quote dear friend.

[Pax]

oh, so true... you'll forget the difference in some way or another... sometimes i got used to it too much i forget which is the real one to the fake, isn't it, right?
my friend, thank you for always reading my work... grateful with that and i appreciate that :)... take care always :)

[Lonely Islander]

Take care of yourself too dear Pax n it is always a pleasure to read your work:-D:-D:-).