an excerpt on a review i had given... just wanted to share this and have a greetings to everyone...
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How do I Love this "L" factor.... Live your Life Like the Love Lives in You, my mantra...
this was stunning my dearest friend....And I wish you the most happy Valentines day as ever.... ♥ however I am no Valentine's Lover, I Love this write... for the sharing Love but Valentine's day, should be an everyday Loving day, and not only when it's the 14'th of February... and shops make profit out of it by promoting and ignoring the true meaning of it...., "(call me a whiner)" but I truly like your Lovely words it is just my honest opinion about this day.... But I so Loved this Love.... You're always reaching the skyline with your amazing philosophical insights.... forgive my Dutch mouth. XXX lol
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
lol.... you made me smile my dearest friend... for you remind me so much this UStv show I have been .. read morelol.... you made me smile my dearest friend... for you remind me so much this UStv show I have been watching... you said the exact same thing as this character of the show and it was about valentine’s day...it was quite comedy actually...
With that it made me think as well yes the shops makes a profit of it.. like any other special day like mother’s day or father’s day… what can we do, people has to makes a living…like us, it’s part of our life to work or to sell…. Enovation’s of product that will satisfy their customers that’s what I think… to make everything much easier they say… then people succumb to it, what can I say some humans like easier way….i do too sometimes… the things is, it’s up to us how to handle and make used of it to a much better and heartfelt way on showing our love to our love ones… like I said above: Love takes effort…
Thank you so much dearest…. It made me think about this things… your great as always :)
11 Years Ago
All I can say to your wonderful words, you're right too.... when I worked myself as shop manager, lo.. read moreAll I can say to your wonderful words, you're right too.... when I worked myself as shop manager, long ago, I was doing nothing more than selling... it was my bread. :) But it gave me also a cheating feeling abou how greedy I was. Better no selling for me anymore :)Love indeed takes so much effort, we are up to the 20 years... lol hugs honey! xxx
at some point we are greedy...we are only humans... as you learned to understand you stand.. you'll .. read moreat some point we are greedy...we are only humans... as you learned to understand you stand.. you'll know were to moderate yourself...
hugs back... 20 years and more... even i can't achieved those years in total... i will never forgot you and my friends here...that are very closed to me... in WC... i was shape emotionally and intellectually... i owe myself so much with guys&girls here on the learning i achieved today... thank you dearest. :)
11 Years Ago
typo* as you learned to understand were you stand.. now i hate errors...lol
11 Years Ago
This place makes everyone grow, sweetheart, that's beautiful. I really treasure you guys for what yo.. read moreThis place makes everyone grow, sweetheart, that's beautiful. I really treasure you guys for what you have done for me too... you are the best! X don't worry about the typo dear, understood you perfectly!! *hugs*
As per usual, you offer a refreshing piece to counter my morbid musings haha Well done my friend, hope you have a great day as well :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
i thought its much of a cliche... but im glad you find it refreshing...actually it maybe its refresh.. read morei thought its much of a cliche... but im glad you find it refreshing...actually it maybe its refreshing because i felt the longing and distance of the poem i had read...that this person is not ready to love again... but then i think any person is always ready to love... its just fear of being broken again or any other fear that makes a person not ready for it... that's the perspective of the simple poem..
thank you very much my friend
Thank you Pax! This is very Beautiful with a capital B and full of ..wait for it...hahaha love yes, you said it. love, folks! Come and get it here :) Happy Valentine's to Paxie, WC's biggest Sweetheart!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
lol...hahaha...i felt like i become a chocolate...lol.. your most welcome....hugs
I loved it, i really want to do clap for you. I love here few lines, the lines that i much loved are,
love is love...
I know that everyone knows that a soul isn't complete without its other half.........
such a great impact you've made on me by your this writing i'd say. I felt happy to read this one. Nicely written, great job.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
hey my friend... its so good that you have visit and review my write that made an impact on you... t.. read morehey my friend... its so good that you have visit and review my write that made an impact on you... thank you
11 Years Ago
My pleasure :-''), yeah, impact on me truly. Great words used by you.
Anyway, it's now 00:45,.. read moreMy pleasure :-''), yeah, impact on me truly. Great words used by you.
Anyway, it's now 00:45, & i think i should have to go to sleep.
Bye for now. See you later on.
Good-night, lovely dreams.
You're too sweet Pax, now that Valentine I can live with!! ♥♥
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
i hope there is not ants that would eat me whole...lol..
i hope we spread love not war and mor.. read morei hope there is not ants that would eat me whole...lol..
i hope we spread love not war and more babies being conceived...lol again on the last part.....hehe
joke set aside... happy valentines my friend...
11 Years Ago
HA!! Babies, I take it all back, are you out of your flipping mind?! ;-)
11 Years Ago
am... maybe... now I'm lost...fading... ;) well i guess valentines put chaos in the mind ;D
11 Years Ago
Mostly what it does is put money in the florist's hand, and Hallmark! ;-)
11 Years Ago
and hey don't forget the chocolates as well... you want one... i have extra toblerone here
11 Years Ago
Ooooo sounds good for breakfast! Enjoy your day my dear friend ;-)
11 Years Ago
smiling... thanks ms.F my friend... make this day a beautiful day... have a great day to u...
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Where are the sweet treats like you in real life is what I wanna know! ;-)
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the world is quite big, but you'll never know someone is hiding in your neighborhood... just look de.. read morethe world is quite big, but you'll never know someone is hiding in your neighborhood... just look deep my friend..;)
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Oh geez, I think everyone in this little village is weirder than me, if you can believe that.... ;-.. read moreOh geez, I think everyone in this little village is weirder than me, if you can believe that.... ;-)
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oh that's a bummer... i think your the special one and more unique... and maybe those people just di.. read moreoh that's a bummer... i think your the special one and more unique... and maybe those people just didn't see that...well i see they are all wearing masked... :D
11 Years Ago
That's the bit problemo in the love department, everyone wearing masks, you hit the nail on the head.. read moreThat's the bit problemo in the love department, everyone wearing masks, you hit the nail on the head oh wise one! ;-)
11 Years Ago
lol... nah, not that wise yet...well... i asked u how do u unmasked someone?
11 Years Ago
pfft if I knew, would I be writing all this crazed poetry!? ;-P
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How do you unmasked someone…
Hmm….I’ll give your situations and this is how I think…... read moreHow do you unmasked someone…
Hmm….I’ll give your situations and this is how I think….
Is it by love and understanding and with that you’ll see the walls crumbling down slowly opening up to u…
Or
is it about time and patience…. Waiting for someone to come someday… then you’ll end up alone… not that right… we don’t want that… but love and patience in a way that we put risk to search… to know someone with patience not raging hormones…
Or
Have you ever felt the longing when you kiss a person, you felt that you belong with each other… with this distinct feeling of belongingness to this person…. ?
Or
Your taking all the risk, going out and going out with someone just to feel love… changing another to another then you’ll end a loser for you are taking the fear too much at heart… or you distance yourself too much because of this certain fear…
…. Now im not sure those situation matters on how to unmask someone… I guess the thing is …. Understanding and conversation are the keys to a relationship right…I guess we just have to dig, dig, dig.. and understanding(acceptance) is the key ingredient I suppose to the one you have learned to love… for no body is perfect… now im talking crap… that’s all I could say…
11 Years Ago
Ha, too much to think about, why does love have to be that freaking difficult!...besides, I've done .. read moreHa, too much to think about, why does love have to be that freaking difficult!...besides, I've done all of the above, I'm still a loser @ this love connection ;-)
11 Years Ago
oh god...yes indeed why it has to be this difficult.... why would u say your the loser? you have don.. read moreoh god...yes indeed why it has to be this difficult.... why would u say your the loser? you have done everything... did u regret it or regretted something that makes u think your the loser in love...
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All of the above ;-)
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for what i see my friend... you didn't regret it all... for i think you have achieved something with.. read morefor what i see my friend... you didn't regret it all... for i think you have achieved something with all that experienced, that's something to be happy for... that's something to celebrate for today... learning the beauty of what you achieved and the simple things that you already have... some simple things are big enough to fill the whole deep inside...
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See? I told you, you were wise! You're right, there are certain parts I don't regret, I just like t.. read moreSee? I told you, you were wise! You're right, there are certain parts I don't regret, I just like to b***h about it,... ;-P
11 Years Ago
haha.... lol
that's the part i like about u... you like to b***h about it and made it more fun.. read morehaha.... lol
that's the part i like about u... you like to b***h about it and made it more fun...
thanks for an entertaining conversation my friend....
11 Years Ago
Hahaha, too funny, I'm so happy to hear you like the bitchy parts of me, now...if you could only tal.. read moreHahaha, too funny, I'm so happy to hear you like the bitchy parts of me, now...if you could only talk to some other people on my behalf..... ;-)
11 Years Ago
sure... and i think the whole wc already know your a fun person to be friend with...
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