a drop of life

I'm planning to take a part 2 on this or i should not, now i wonder...

 

 

~Love~

 

I never knew that feeling

A word without meaning

…A stranger to what I felt…

Thought it’s strange that I knew it so well

 

 

~Life~

 

I walk by with you as I talk about you

…Existence is a mere essence…

It’s the life underneath my roots

My whole being is defined of what I decide about you

 

 

~choices~

 

I kept on thinking of you

A mystery in every event I stumble upon

Nonetheless your part of me that i fully submit

Facing and standing still

In all the consequences and risk

I have brought upon

in the end

Despite all those obstacles

I know deep within me

There will come a time

I’ll be able to dance

…In rhythm of contentment…

 

 

~dream~

 

You’re in my fantasy

…You’re in my Jar of unfulfilled wishes…

I walk in your clouds of heavenly sky

Reality slaps me too many times

Yet no matter how painful reality is

I still go to your realm

And dream an endless dream

Of my unfulfilled wonderings

Wishing & hoping

 

 

~Alive~

 

Living is as much as fading

Purpose of what I suppose

Is just another make-up prose

Of my days

Principles are timeless

…Endless…

Old yet golden

Though some are forgotten

throughout the pages of history

faded

But then they're relived now

Through experiences

As life goes on and on

As you live by

In its circling Journey

 

 

~Freedom~

 

I can’t be with you

as I am chained

Much controlled

Much reserved

Much more refined

…As if I’m bound to be blocked…

Locked within a nut shell

I guess being free isn’t allowed

Without hard labor

 

 

Author's Note

a pondering fiction

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Seems to me that you found someone with whom you felt almost at home, let's say, then as things progressed, you began to wonder about the different aspects of your so far independent lifestyle... hence your thoughts come under the sub.titles. The thoughts you placed under each are rather like the negatives and positives one can use to help make an important decision. But the all telling areas are the 'Alive and Freedom .. they wrap up what's come before, gradually release you in that place you were before. Maybe you 'escape' knowing far more about yourself and armed for the next time! Considerable thought processes above.

[Pax]

dear Ms. Em's,
i truly appreciate your insight on how to read my words. Independent Lifestyle made me more mature in understanding life.... i so love the lines on alive and freedom for they say so much of what's life's outcome(i think). I just wish I'm much armed for what life throw's at us, otherwise I'm always prepared now. Writing really helps me understand the ways of life and the reviews made me understand it more better than myself. Thank you so much.
your friendly neighbor,
w.Pax :)

[emmajoy]

Now you've added that, will later read your post again. :) My pleasure and interest.

[emmajoy]

You have a very fine way of living in and looking into your world. Life should be a good and sweet one for you, Pax. Truly pray it is.

[Pax]

oh, i didn't notice you here :), I'm praying every-night that every tomorrow will be ok and fine just as today... thank you greatly ms. Em's...

[kublakhan27]

This piece outlines the so-called human condition with great poignancy and universality...there's a little something for everyone to relate to here...great piece my friend :)

[Pax]

you say great words my friend... I truly appreciate your time in reading my poem... and your review is an insight as well...

[kublakhan27]

You're very welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

I think you are maturing in age and wisdom and you want to share your life's experiences with your readers ( us ) for it shows the depth of your ocean and the height of your sky. So many good lines and timeless wisdom to quote from and apply in our lives. I like how you are becoming more and more relatable and more passionate. I always enjoy and appreciate your wisdom and creativity...
Keep it up my friend...:)

[Pax]

"the depth of your ocean and the height of your sky."
~ wow, that's what i call a poetic review from you my friend...
thank you greatly for seeing the creativity and the wisdom we both learned from our friend and from each others write...your indeed an amazing fellow poet...

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[CS]

I really like the idea of taking thoughts or feelings or words and giving them a persona and having dialogue with them. The questioning in this is very nice. I feel like I am reading a screenplay. I can almost see this like a one man show acted out as you pace a stage.
Interesting piece, Pax :)

[Pax]

I love your perception dear one… you have seen a great deal, I truly thank you for your awesome views...