To learned

my road towards a better way i guess...

Don’t over ponder the things you don’t have power

Sometimes you just have to let time slide by

For the chances to pass by

Making a road of much better opportunity along the way…

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In life some chances are not meant to be understood

~But intended to be learned as you had experienced those times~

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Author's Note

Not sure it fits for a poem... though i think it fits more for a quote...
this is my pondering times of my life...
thank you for reading me...

Reviews

[gabrielle]

"The Serenity Prayer" comes to mind while reading this kabayan.
I must say that if we over ponder and over analyze situations we sort of pre-empt the surprises this life can offer. However, hitting the road without thinking, would also be dangerous. I guess, as you conveyed in most of your writings, balance is always the key.
This piece is truly worth pondering.
By the way, was the title intentional?

[Pax]

you know me so well now kabayan... yes ....moderation and balance is the key to my writings and this one you got it on the spot of your view... i know what you meant without thinking... its just that when your too exhausted in thinking for the solution that your going in circles that is meant that you need to let it go and relax or to have a break... that is why i put sometimes... hehe.. i love your responsive review kabayan... thank you so much..

[RachelReaper]

I love the ending so much! Diving headfirst into opportunities and taking them as they are. I love this poem, great write and is motivational to take chances.

[Pax]

my friend, thank you so much... I'm glad you found the right motivation of its intended meaning... and go for it...

[RachelReaper]

:)

[Lupus Kaos]

I think that you express really fluently the ideas you have in your mind. This is really good. And the words you use are nice. This writing makes me think how I should hope for the road to bring me good things to enjoy. It put something in my mind, other than emptiness.

[Pax]

I see that you have seen this write... I will say my reply to your reality and imagination... well I'm not a therapist, but i learned a lot in writing down my emotions... and i have seen every part of me in my poems...
"This writing makes me think how I should hope for the road to bring me good things to enjoy."~ yes your very right... we have our freedom to enjoy every chances that comes and go... that is why there is a saying life to the fullest... I'm glad you find the lesson on it my friend... thank you so much for reviewing..

[Marie]

Life is a complicated riddle...often we have to wait for the answeres. It can be a long time.

[Pax]

another insightful review my friend... you are so wise Marie... Thank you!

[Extant]

A quote I'd say.
Pondering my life I have come to the conclusion that things happen and choices are made, whether part of some greater scheme or one human's life. I always remember to just breathe. Best wishes.

[Pax]

yes, you have said it perfectly my friend... Thank you very much!

[kublakhan27]

I am an excessive ponderer, I feel the need to rationalize everything...even my doctor has told me that :P I should memorize your words and recite them to myself every ten minutes or so haha...nice work man, I relate to this one for sure.

[Pax]

hahaha.... you must have a over active mind... the thing is you need to calm the mind and enjoy each passing moment and reflect on it later on... thank you greatly my friend...

[kublakhan27]

You are most welcome as always...I definitely have an over-active mind, no doubt about that haha I am slowly but surely working towards the application of your advice...I wish I had discovered meditation at an earlier age :P

[Renée]

I think your right on that one Pax...more quotes than poem..but still has value ( :

[Pax]

Thank you much dear friend... I'm glad you have found the value in it... I'm just trying to be positive all the time not to mind so much with the struggles...

[Renée]

you know Pax...we have a delightful little toy ...it is a cylinder and you put a finger in each end..and the more you pull to get out..the more you are locked in..but if you relax ..it releases your fingers... kind of like your mind ( ;