Ashen Gray
A Poem by Pax
(#_#) ~ Beauty in Solemnity
My day seems to be in a dark place
It’s like I’m separated and out of trace
Silence is my only answer to the choices I only ponder
My leaves have turn into weathery colors
Ashen gray
It keeps on falling as I keep on growing
My mind is at ease on the bed grass I see
Seems like it’s in tune with my fantasy
Like illusion has come out of my reality
There is beauty in solemnity
But in truth it’s lonely
when you're alone.
I dream of a time I make memories
Great with victories
but then I felt it was not worth it
for achievements are savor to someone you shared with
This place has come to its highs and lows
a moment I borrow in depths of sorrow
I reach out to tranquility
For my patience is my virtue in this painted creativity
Someday I will bear the fruit of my owning glory
Continuing the roots of my existence
Somewhere in time.
© 2014 Pax
Author's Note
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This work is totally fiction but then again it’s a piece of me totally base on my emotions of what i felt on the current situation...
I guess I'm being moody this past days... though i used it to write to ease some tension on the mind...
always thank you for reading my works... your responses are always a treasure to me....
credits to the photo:
the white field by Dave-ellis
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Dear poet, a wonderful piece, one that has grabbed hold of me, making me yearn to tell you this: You are NOT alone...
So many of us have been, or remain in this state of loneliness, where our need to share, to communicate, to be understood, and have a "witness" to our life. Sometimes, in our despair, we neglect to look around, our eyes blinded to those who have always been there, even though we can not see them, or even feel them. You would be surprised to find that the most unexpected souls have be present all along. Take the quiet moments to breathe and listen, let your mind be aware... I am here, I will be, with my hand reaching out dear friend. So many understanding souls exist in this cyber space, a concentrated energy that can get you to realize your worth, your life and soul is witnessed by us all!
Sending you much Love and light my fellow poet, keep expressing yourself!
XX
P
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
* the freedom to think .... Sorry:)
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11 Years Ago
Salamat Kaibigan, truly appreciate your visit and thoughts about my poem.
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11 Years Ago
Walang Anuman:)
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11 Years Ago
greatful with your visit ms. Cassie... thank you for reading my poem.. its a pleasure to hear your t.. read moregreatful with your visit ms. Cassie... thank you for reading my poem.. its a pleasure to hear your thoughts.. thank you :)
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11 Years Ago
you are more then welcome, its been awhile since I've been on here, I have a lot of reading to catch.. read moreyou are more then welcome, its been awhile since I've been on here, I have a lot of reading to catch up on. TRUST I will def. be back around for more of you honey!! =)
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