Duality

Duality

A Poem by Pax
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a poem about Equilibrium and many more... :)

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Has Night deserted Day

Or Day just can’t stand Night

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Good is staying silent

Though Shines Brightly

Lighting the pathways that have come across its Being

Warm is burning its Pain 

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Evil is out in the open

Engulfing all corners with Darkness

Blinding all the pathways that have come across it Being

 Cold is shrilling its Numbness

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A step into Reality is a Journey

towards to the unending challenges

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A flight into Fantasy is a Dreamland Moments

of life’s relaxation in short time bases

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Duality has two faces

while Neutrality has none.

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 Heaven’s tranquility Sparkles

Earth blooms in Balance

Hell cries in Vain

Time,

 Dimension,

Situation& reaction

Partake its Solution

 

Manifestation,

Imagination & Illusion,

Manage its Creation

 

All hangs in a state of Equilibrium

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~w.Pax~

 

© 2013 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
photo's are from google pile up together by me to achieved its purpose for the poems...

thank you for reading!

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This was a treasure trove of wisdom and powerful insights on life and its duality where only in the balance we can seek perfection but not in our neutrality . We have to fight the good fight , suffer the consequences of our actions , live to the fullest even in the face storms and rains , confront the realities of the unjust world for we have to set the path and the mission to achieve the inner peace and joy .
Keep penning my friend and finding that equilibrium ...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Nice work Pax, I love the formatting, it looks as good as it reads.

'Duality has two faces
while Neutrality has none.'

Much food for thought packed into your poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duality as a concept of creation, a finding the purpose where there is nothing but the fleeting aspect of time and eternity, wonderful work here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deep thought provoking write with such imagery , love the word choice. Lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Well done,Pax. This is very thought provoking, and comes together beautifully. Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely worded piece my friend, you leave the reader thinking literally in every sentence.

I've read it 5 times, and every time I see new things.
Everything is ultimately related to the balance, and the balance in life, gods, nature, space, opposites, in everything.
You stood here very strongly to observe all from next to the sidelines, a gift.

Nice work, dearest friend

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'Cold is shrilling its Numbness'

this one is just brilliant, i loved it. creative, alive. i loved the line i've highlighted, we've just had a little snow and your words summed that up perfectly. fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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It is all relative, isn't it Pax? We believe what we perceive. Well done, my friend :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pax

11 Years Ago

i think i would say yes... thank you dear one.:)
You've certainly come to the right conclusion: Everything in an ever-changing universe finds itself constantly being forced into balance; a balance that too often just seems like chaos.
Big issues tackled, here, Pax!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Every part could be a small poem on its own...now I very rarely make suggestions unless they're specifically asked for, but I think you could even number each part...it would read like an index of chapters, and each part still offers a lot of wiggle room for a reader to apply their sentiments to yours...but that's undoubtedly my OCD talking, and my compulsive need to organize things, even free verse :P But great work my friend, whatever the context :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha no worries, the symbols are just as effective...OCD is Obsessive- Compulsive Disorder, and that.. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

i think you need to try being messy sometime...for its a bit fun at times... :D
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Oh I know...maybe when I get old and senile the messiness will come :D
Lots to ponder with this rather deep write. I'm still trying to wrap my head around it all. (Example: I understand that duality would have two faces. But I thought neutrality would have many or all. But that is only my mind.)
Great thoughts!

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Well it speaks to balance Michael! ha....
Michael G.

11 Years Ago

Ha! Too true!

To find a balance,
you must find two things equal...
compleme.. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

ha! never intended to sway our talk to food... but still there is balance everywhere... food is no e.. read more

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