Duality

a poem about Equilibrium and many more... :)

 

 

 

Has Night deserted Day

Or Day just can’t stand Night

*

Good is staying silent

Though Shines Brightly

Lighting the pathways that have come across its Being

Warm is burning its Pain 

@

Evil is out in the open

Engulfing all corners with Darkness

Blinding all the pathways that have come across it Being

 Cold is shrilling its Numbness

*

A step into Reality is a Journey

towards to the unending challenges

*

A flight into Fantasy is a Dreamland Moments

of life’s relaxation in short time bases

*

Duality has two faces

while Neutrality has none.

*

 Heaven’s tranquility Sparkles

Earth blooms in Balance

Hell cries in Vain

* 

Time,

 Dimension,

Situation& reaction

Partake its Solution

 

Manifestation,

Imagination & Illusion,

Manage its Creation

 

All hangs in a state of Equilibrium

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~w.Pax~

 

Author's Note

photo's are from google pile up together by me to achieved its purpose for the poems...

thank you for reading!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

This was a treasure trove of wisdom and powerful insights on life and its duality where only in the balance we can seek perfection but not in our neutrality . We have to fight the good fight , suffer the consequences of our actions , live to the fullest even in the face storms and rains , confront the realities of the unjust world for we have to set the path and the mission to achieve the inner peace and joy .
Keep penning my friend and finding that equilibrium ...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Napaka-colorful naman ng piece na to. LOL.

The duality of nature... day and night, black and white, good and bad... those are the two sides of life.

But I can see here more about balance than duality. Duality is just a part of this...so I think I can make something which focuses on the duality of human nature. LOL.

Anyway, when it comes to balance/ equilibrium...I really like how you crafted this piece. Balance is a great concept, for in life we cannot achieve contentment if we don't have equilibrium in all things around us.

A brilliant piece here, my friend. Keep inspiring uninspired people like __. LOL. Thanks for the link.

[Marie]

The college of poems is a great expression for the poetry. Your use of colour and form is awesome, and you images are lovely.

[Pete Langley]

I`m sorry to say this piece leaves me cold. The sentiments are laudable, but phrased as slogans. They make assumptions that man can control his own destiny. The problem is inherent in the asssumption - he is combative, confrontational and territorial. This fails as a thesis and as a poem. I`m sorry again P.

[Pax]

no problem, i value your opinion...for it strike a question to my thoughts...
but how can you say this:They make assumptions that man can control his own destiny. why, does man really can't control his own destiny... do you think that destiny is shape by our own choices...

[Pete Langley]

This is a philosophical question that`s been around since Plato and before - and he came to the same conclusion as most philosophers throughout history have endorsed - that man as a species is disruptive and incapable of the equilibrium he craves. Your piece ellicites collective action - altruistic but completely impossible to accomplish.

[Pax]

wow... actually to be honest, i haven't touch or understand plato's work or any other philosopher... though i know them through history but actually studying their works...no, i have no idea...

this piece only talks about in what i see around me in media(tv, internet & around me) and understand in my own way of thinking... just a stream of consciousness... it will never be a thesis, this is just a fantasy of thoughts mr. Pete... a creative way on showing how i think... and in your words i see reality in it.... yes I'am never sure humanity can achieved equilibrium(man is too imperfect perhaps)... still in some way or another do you think equilibrium exist around us(but then that's just what i believed/perceived)...

all in all mr. Pete i truly thank you for your opinion.. it made me really think...thanks again

[Pete Langley]

There`s nothing to thank me for, mate! I`m as imperfect as the next man, and more than most.P.

[icelandicblue]

This is such an energetic poem filled with so many contrasting and clever images. I really liked:

Duality has two faces

while Neutrality has none.

This was deep and enjoyable to read.

[Andie]

This was very well put. It makes me think.
Nice job, Pax. :)

[Muse]

First off..kudos to a brilliant pic to inspire both the writer and reader. The struggle between all that is good and bad in this world has become an endless battle. Does there need to be a balance...can there be too much light? How would we know...I don't think I've seen it.

[RachelReaper]

this poem was awesome! I am favoriting this! The only critique I would have, and I'm not sure if you did this on purpose or not, but in between the stanzas there is always a * and in between one of the stanzas instead of a * there is an @. But seriously great write! :)

[Pax]

those are symbols to represent my artistic expression: feel * is like stars(my friend said i must used numbers to represent indexes, yet i find * works for my artistic expression well), also they represents a separation of each thoughts... and lastly the @ represents 'and' or something just a borderline between good and evil...Thank you very much my friend, always a pleasure to hear your thoughts about my poem... :)

[RachelReaper]

oh... I see! Then awesome idea!

[Tree]

Very unique Pax. The visual artist in you and the writer merge to give birth to a very interesting, and profound piece. Well done/ Mr. pax

[Androglossia]

Your objective, Pax, in writing this poem is priceless and is achieved.

Balance does not only apply to the largest and the most important aspect in nature, it also applies even to the smallest part in a wide variety of contexts .

Federations, union, the government needs a system in which all competing influences are balanced, in order to have everything properly in place. I think Pax, with equilibrium, everything will be in great harmony.

Great intention. Great write:)

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Wow, it kinda has a fantasy, magic like feel to it, which is good for the imagination. A great escape from reality into a world that swirls with wonders. Awesome job, Pax.

[Pax]

my friend its nice to see you around... thank you so much..