distinctive nature

very raw....

Truth show its Jurisdictions

Lies shows its changeable pretensions

Morality affix to cultural definition

                                                in diverse practice

Justice can conceive misconception’s prejudice

Capsulated answers are sometimes hardest to digest

Reasonable solutions varies in deferential understanding

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How, how will I make a choice in such distinctive nature?

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The matters of the heart is concerned of the well being of others

For those who wait, suffers in silence.

A hush hunger, I pray

waiting for heaven to sway their profound ways

to give its signs of grace

for those who wait in vain

will not be in waste.

 

Author's Note

I'm back but not totally, I'll be reviewing soon my friends...
some of my choices is getting complicated or atleast for me, i make it complicated or its just fear of unfortunate events, fear making its wall making it hard to overpower...or i don't know anymore....

thanks for reading and always being there for me...

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Speechless. I just love these lines:
"I pray
waiting for heaven to sway their profound ways
to give its signs of grace
for those who wait in vain
will not be in waste."

Thanks for sharing this work, bro. Love it. I can't explain more. I salute all posts and insights (regarding a quote) at your FB page.

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful poem Mr pax. Glad to see you're coming back.

[CS]

....just want you to know I am listening....

[asdarkeyesclose]

'How, how will I make a choice in such distinctive nature?'

i hope you're ok- you should only be here when you want to be, you'll know when the time feels right again. i think i shall call you my philosopher poet, such is the beauty of your reflections on life. fantastic.

[kublakhan27]

I'd say your writing is becoming more refined with each piece...it's like your poetic voice is really "taking shape" now...unfortunately there's no better way of finding one's voice than having to endure personal turmoil...but as you've pointed out above, you know that I, and many others here, have your back :)

[Sami Khalil]

First of all , I hope all is well with you or will be well . Secondly, your voice of love, hope and reason is missed here greatly amongst your friends and co-authors for we miss the echos of your life... Thirdly, I think you have hit it on the head when you said :
" waiting for heaven to sway their profound ways
to give its signs of grace
for those who wait in vain
will not be in waste."
I can't add more to those beautiful words...:)

[KAOlmsted]

I can feel this...it's alive...that inner turmoil, like, What Should I Do??? You know? It made me very edgy, this...but in a good way. Like I want to walk around my house and shout, "Right?" Really well done. And it's nice to see you, by the way. You take your time. We're not going anywhere ;-)