distinctive nature

distinctive nature

A Poem by Pax
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very raw....

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Truth show its Jurisdictions

Lies shows its changeable pretensions

Morality affix to cultural definition

                                                in diverse practice

Justice can conceive misconception’s prejudice

Capsulated answers are sometimes hardest to digest

Reasonable solutions varies in deferential understanding


!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How, how will I make a choice in such distinctive nature?

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


The matters of the heart is concerned of the well being of others

For those who wait, suffers in silence.

A hush hunger, I pray

waiting for heaven to sway their profound ways

to give its signs of grace

for those who wait in vain

will not be in waste.

 

© 2013 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
I'm back but not totally, I'll be reviewing soon my friends...
some of my choices is getting complicated or atleast for me, i make it complicated or its just fear of unfortunate events, fear making its wall making it hard to overpower...or i don't know anymore....

thanks for reading and always being there for me...

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Speechless. I just love these lines:
"I pray
waiting for heaven to sway their profound ways
to give its signs of grace
for those who wait in vain
will not be in waste."

Thanks for sharing this work, bro. Love it. I can't explain more. I salute all posts and insights (regarding a quote) at your FB page.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Excellent Pax, I believe those first three lines say it in a nutshell.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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wonderful! i sense you are going to make a huge impression with this and future writes!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pax your much stronger than you think. I know you'll be fine. its nice to see you again.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We all face obfuscate things.Sometimes, intelligence isn't enough to make good decisions.We all need to stay in a solitary world not to isolate ourselves to others but to think deeply. In your case, I think you only need to meditate :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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sometimes we have to reach out even if ridden with fear and to tell someone you love them or strive for what you want before it leaves you

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

listening Pax ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I'm listening too, dear friend.... we all do love you here.
I hope you will find a way honey....

You know I'm always having your back, and you can free-fall I catch you! xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Poignant lovely write Wilyham stay strong. Morality affixed to cultural definition ..

Posted 11 Years Ago


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If you choose with your heart it will show you justice and truth and morality.

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