distinctive nature

very raw....

Truth show its Jurisdictions

Lies shows its changeable pretensions

Morality affix to cultural definition

                                                in diverse practice

Justice can conceive misconception’s prejudice

Capsulated answers are sometimes hardest to digest

Reasonable solutions varies in deferential understanding

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How, how will I make a choice in such distinctive nature?

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The matters of the heart is concerned of the well being of others

For those who wait, suffers in silence.

A hush hunger, I pray

waiting for heaven to sway their profound ways

to give its signs of grace

for those who wait in vain

will not be in waste.

 

Author's Note

I'm back but not totally, I'll be reviewing soon my friends...
some of my choices is getting complicated or atleast for me, i make it complicated or its just fear of unfortunate events, fear making its wall making it hard to overpower...or i don't know anymore....

thanks for reading and always being there for me...

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Speechless. I just love these lines:
"I pray
waiting for heaven to sway their profound ways
to give its signs of grace
for those who wait in vain
will not be in waste."

Thanks for sharing this work, bro. Love it. I can't explain more. I salute all posts and insights (regarding a quote) at your FB page.

[Shep]

I always have problems when it comes to matters of the heart. Providing i had one... Good poem.

[Wondering Mind]

raw indeed... entices the mind to question more..nicely done

[SHEEMA HUQ]

distingusing how the heart functions with how the brain operates is a plausable approach, very well written, well done

[Priscilla Sayers]

Very wise contemplation. And yet, there is no answer. For, nature and civilized concepts are never in harmony. The clashing of human nature, the rules of society, the forever evolving universe... a muddle of combinations and possibilities create only gray my friend, only gray. Great thought provoking piece!

[writing mojo]

love the divine dividing flow of this mystery of this mysticism of being as two' you have created with blanking profound damns you awoken in my head...good piece

[FJ Davis]

"Capsulated answers are sometimes hardest to digest."
Might argue the form of the first word (capsulized?), but the meaning is clear--and the line is pretty damn good!
Nice work, Pax.

[Michael X]

when reality and dreams collide, who is damaged beyond repair and who comes out damaged but still able to continue, let be the dream. Pondering life and the harshness of, great work here, the style is a formula for success

[Pax]

thank you so much my friend...i hoping for soon.. :)

[sirenribbon@thehptshirt..]

A big pound of power. Interesting.