weary heart

chapter 2 Bone's thoughts...

          

Now I wonder what happened to us. Is our friendship come to a close? Is it really over, the pressure on the studio is quite a headache for it’s the first time for me. A breathe of a new career with a whole lot different pressure not like the business industry. They are planning a wide release on my single on the radio tomorrow. If it’s a success then the album will follow. So I’m an experimental artist for I’m new to the music industry. And they are pressuring me to convince Less to sing a duet with me even just one song for the producers like her cute unique voice..

Hmm.. Lessie still used the same password in her condo. Coming here without knowing she still lived here is a messy situation, though it’s still the same password so I guess she still keeping this condo. I wonder, she's married now and keeping this condo is a bit of a question. Maybe they both lived here for it’s a fantastic condo. Oh well, better check if all is still the same.

Wow, seems like nothing has changed. Everything is still the same, clean and well arranged. I missed hanging out here; it brings out our collage memories. And the view of the city, the breath-taking city lights and shimmering moon light. I remember we watched, talk nonsense all night and had slept in this huge couch. I remember her drooling face. *chuckling* oh some simple memories makes my heart skip a beat.

*leaning against the couch now with a weary heart*

Why is my heart wondering to a married woman now. Why is my heart longing to a woman’s heart that I lost months ago. Why don’t I understand this complicated feelings. I know, I love her from before yet it was only friendship and now I guess, I don’t know at all. Maybe some things are left behind and move on as she has move on as well. I better not disturb the tranquility of their space. I’m out of the picture now, I’m just the outsidee friend. Better go before someone’s got home from work.

*as Bone stand’s up and about head towards the front door then suddenly it opens wide to Lessie’s tired and a bit shock features.*

Author's Note

gonna compile it later for im still thinking about the title of the book...
enjoy
merry christmas...

Reviews

[Horizon K.]

Fascinating! It takes some guts to walk into the home of a past lover... I'm so curious what Lessie's response is going to be, as it seems these two cannot stop thinking about each other despite the huge changes their lives have taken as they have grown apart...

[Pax]

indeed.... Oh, the next part is still far ahead... this book is quite an experiment my friend... i dive in to thoughts to thoughts of each characters... so its a little bit of mixed up... i hope you'll not be confused on the shifting of thoughts parts...... thank you again for reading this...

[Horizon K.]

not confused... I enjoy the different perspectives and always different takes on storytelling methods...

[Dhaye]

Reminiscence...sometimes creates heartache specially when the memoirs are so poignant.
Haha! Glad the couple's not there. He's like a robber in that situation..getting inside one's place without the knowledge of the owner.

Is our friendship come to a closed------*Has our friendship come to a *close?
I wonder, she married now ----I wonder, *she's married now
and move on as she has move on----and *moved on as she has *moved on

[Pax]

big thanks, and hugs... for the grammar improvements... I appreciate this so much my pretty friend...

[Shep]

I'd be shocked to. Good story, sorry i don't say lot. But thats me when i find a good story.

[Marie]

These are very interesting chapters, though I can't suggest a title for the book yet.

[Pax]

thank you Marie... please don't hesitate if you find some errors... thank you for having the time in reading this... I so appreciate it!...

[Marie]

You make some errors in your tenses...but that in no way detracts from the stories...

[Corset]

YOU DID! %$#$#%%$ PAXIE!!!

[Corset]

whoooohooo! Face to Face, I can't wait to see how she reacts, or him for that matter, I hope this is not a cliff hanger here, oh please you did not leave me here did you?

[Pax]

you made my day my friend... yes a bit of a cliff hanger.... I'm still fixing the next chapter... thank you much!

[Corset]

please hurry :)

[Corset]

but don't rush, take your creative time, but please hurry lol...

[Corset]

will you send me a heads up again please? so I don't wait longer than necessary, lol

[Pax]

big smiles and hugs... yes I will...

[Corset]

Thank you sweetie! xxxoooxx