Home in deep Blue

a reflection of my current situation in poetic format

In the breeze of cold wind

Shivering in temperamental emotional pondering

I engulf in a journey of motion steering

Who are they who makes head aching problems

People who succumb to their will, like me!

Suffers a low, unbalance gold fee

I’m widening the patience I have left

Though I’m tired of these awful mess

The aura of fine is at my will

A choice to pay the bills

Its a challenging flight of my well-being

Time is fast approaching for me to be back Home *

To feel warm again is what I long for…

The hands of cold oceanic waves paints an empty wall

In Deep Blue….

Author's Note

a sad pondering....

remember:
Poetry is self-assessment healing process for us poets…

Reviews

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I feel the yearning of your soul in your flowing words. The longing to touch the shores of your birthland. I truly, truly hope for you to find your journey back to the place you call 'Home'. The place to lay your weary head and warm your heart in it's golden welcoming glow, waiting to embrace you in her welcoming, waiting arms. God speed and many blessing to you.

[Pax]

thank you so much.... I'm really glad you felt it... you see the heart that speaks...

[Marie]

The use of colour and font make this lonely poem very appealing...

[Pax]

thank you marie... the colors are a reminder that i could still be creative in words...

[fiery-san]

It feels lonely, reading this poem, it places me in a situation where I myself is alone at sea longing for home. Good job. ^_^

[Pax]

salamat kabayan... I appreciate your reading a part of me...