Home in deep Blue

a reflection of my current situation in poetic format

In the breeze of cold wind

Shivering in temperamental emotional pondering

I engulf in a journey of motion steering

Who are they who makes head aching problems

People who succumb to their will, like me!

Suffers a low, unbalance gold fee

I’m widening the patience I have left

Though I’m tired of these awful mess

The aura of fine is at my will

A choice to pay the bills

Its a challenging flight of my well-being

Time is fast approaching for me to be back Home *

To feel warm again is what I long for…

The hands of cold oceanic waves paints an empty wall

In Deep Blue….

Author's Note

a sad pondering....

remember:
Poetry is self-assessment healing process for us poets…

Reviews

[Warrior of Death]

Sure is

[Pax]

thank you my friend.

[Renée]

Ending is perfect for your piece ! I can envision the chill of the life around you..the thoughts in your mind then the longing for home... Great Piece

[Pax]

yeah...i guess its just me missing home...
its true they say: there is no place like home...
thank you dear friend...
your tree is shining from here... :)

[Andie]

I think that the font and the color make it very beautiful. It is very deep and makes me think. Nice.

[Pax]

thank you so much for the visit and review...
yes i like it too... glad your find it beautiful...

[revalatia]

Deep... I could feel the drift in this one... nice.

[Pax]

thank you ms. Rev, i appreciate the visit and review...
im glad you have found the profound deepness of it...

[Sugar Plum ♥]

oh I can understand this feeling..everyone needs some time in the "deep blue home", I loved your description and your words, each seem to have strong meaning. i loved the last verse. simply great, Pax!
No♥r

[Pax]

thank you so much my friend.. I'm glad you have touch the feelings on it...

[Frieda P]

You do deep and introspective so well....

[Pax]

introspective oh your the third one who had said that... and that's truly me on how i write... thank you ms. F

[Frieda P]

Sorry, I try not to read other reviewers unless they pop up on the live feed...should have been more original :)

[Pax]

no problem at all ms. F, your review and reading this poem are enough strength for me to keep writing...

[jamal]

such nice flow to writeing......I am a little speachless. Great poem

Keep it up!

[Pax]

thank you so much... I'm so glad you like it..

[Lonely Islander]

Reading this, i feel sad and homesick althouh i am sitting in my bedroom...that's just a way of saying your poems are magical:-):-):-D.

[Pax]

wow, you say such great things... thank you my friend.

[Pax]

Dear loving friend,

Wow, I so admire you, and the power of your words.
This was no exception. Again the honesty with what you
Bring here... lines as: "The aura of fine is at my will" give
Me the feeling of the chain, of self-destruction, even if
You don't want it, your will is choosing it,
Deep blue is the way to warmth, as I've been there before red....
I see you growing, and expressing yourself in a soulful warm way,
And I see a winner, a survivor....

Always,

E. *hugs*

[Pax]

My dearest friend... I'm really really glad you felt the emotions on it... and sharing your thoughts about it as well.... yes its a sign of growth..i hope not old age...lol.. :D for at times i feel so old though I'm still not that old and grumpy.. hehe... thank you.. your a winner as well.. for we live strong in the light of positivism... thank you so much...

Hahaha don't worry lovely, you're still young and beautiful....if you're thinking like this until the coffin says: "Hi" I know you're strong.... :D makes me smile, if you're. I"m 30, I'm old, all children look up to me ha! hahaha.... just kidding... (Dutch joke). I love your positivism. And humor, the one who understands mine. Thank you sweetheart xoxo

[Pax]

haha..... better hide from the coffins.. hides on a hoddy for the coffin not to notice me..lol... oh... your not old dear friend... they say life starts at 30... you have higher edge... I'm not 30 yet... few years from now I will be... oh.. I'm still hesitant to show my age.. for i feel old... lol...
thanks,*big hugs*

Coffins, no, I do not think of them, others love to see me in.... :D
As depression of self can distruct.... pity, I feel sorry for them.
haha..... No, not to notice me in either. We know what we are talknig about. lol. Indeed, life starts at 30, you're so right, that's why I changed my snake skin, into renewal, and I am no Evie, Eve, or slave to others anymore... I"m raw, honest, and real now.... the way I was raised.
LOL, you maybe feel old, but your mind is just ancient, as mine too, but you look still like one from "anno 90' (1990) ha! big hugsssss xo

[Pax]

... my mind is ancient... its a bit dusty... it needs a little feathery swipe and then all new... then lets makes this a new beggining towards a better us... be alive and free... hey I'm still using that wings you give me from ebay...lol :D

Yes, a better us, for what we have been through, innocent, and sweet. Healing in the while others like to eat.... your heart out.
I'm pro-new beginning, I always was. Until men can't leave me alone.... and make armies of shredded fellah's. Hahahahaha so glad you still have them! thank you for reflecting them back xoxo

[Sami Khalil]

Time is fast approaching for me to be back Home*

To feel warm again is what I long for…
I feel your feelings in the deep blue. The longing for your country. I hope Mr. Pax the waves will take you wherever your heart desires.
Aloha and Cyanara to your past...

[Pax]

thanks my friend... that's indeed touching... i miss the fresh air of the trees... for here is a sandy dessert... not much of a fresh air... if you enhale the air here you also enhale the dust along too..lol... thank again...

[Sami Khalil]

I can totally understand. And you are welcome.