Life of the Entire Galaxy

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Life of the Entire Galaxy

a puzzle that needs to be solve that brings more confusion to the mind

 a math problem that seeks answers that brings more questions in the end

a riddle with twist and turns that brings more pathways with infinite possibilities

 

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:Authors Critical Thinking Notes:

There are pieces that brings out a much bigger puzzle, it’s an infinite phase that brings the unpredictability of the galaxy’s Life cycle, a tiny bit of fraction can lead to another superior picture.

 

you can never see what it seems to be

Man is trying to answers the cycle of life of the entire galaxy

Guessing that it’s too much information for man to take in his brain

But with the help of technology, maybe they can

I’m not a scientist, I’m not philosopher yet

But wishing I am

Dreams are free

Thinking big made you lost the grasp of reality

Just don’t forget yourself

To step in your ground

Find your balance

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Author's Note

just authors note:
I guess before i really want to be a scientist to solve the mysteries of cancer cell for the fact that my mother died because of it. A philosopher it didn't comes to mind, still I’m not sure I can for the fact that I’m not intelligent to be one, I just want to reflect on things fascinating to me, maybe I'm just a thinker Like my friend said Mr. Sami...maybe his right sometimes i got lost of realities time when i think deep, swimming in the depths of information in my head, imagining the things i want, what will i do, a lot of what if this and that, or thinking the simple things in my simple minded ways…

actually the first special three lines above are for human nature but then again, sometime i said to myself that human nature can be predictable, and this is something much bigger than man itself...

I want to thank ms. corset and mr. sami for a contribution on this write...


please tell me what you think, I need feedback….it’s either I’m wrong or I’m right…you judge…

Reviews

[Caradoc]

I think that only together can mankind discover the answers to our most daunting questions. Only as one people will it be possible to overcome all obstacles. Until humanity manages to see beyond its petty prejudices, the truths we seek will always elude us. Our questions will frustrate us, the answers will only continue to spawn more questions, and the puzzle pieces will remain scattered, the picture fragmented.

It's why I place a high value on poetry and other written works. Every person, no matter how skilled and talented or even untalented and unskilled, holds a piece of the puzzle. They see a piece of the bigger picture, even if it's only a tiny section. Without them and what they perceive we will be lost. All poetry is art, and art is a reflection of the soul and a key to understanding the questions we all ask ourselves.

If you have not already heard the song, "The Humbling River" by the group Puscifer, I invite you to do so. It is a strong expression of my thoughts on the subject.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts my friend. You are already a philosopher.

Be well.

-Caradoc

[Pax]

~my friend i treasure your feedback like everyone else had given me... you see something that sometimes i don't see sometimes... i value your response...thank you so much...
i will listen to the song later...

[Pax]

This is such a interesting topic my friend, How many times, I haven't wondered about all you name here... and visa versa, and upside down, even within my own core to the bone, and didn't found what I wanted... needed, it's such a great philosophical nothingness in all it's interest... and it goes and goes, it never stops.... universal indeed. Still human nature can be very predictable. If you know your mankinds /neighbours well. Still many act, on a higher inner feeling. You probably have had this often, you walk in a supemarket, and think, hmmm I rather turn around with a big circle to avoid that person, instead of one your senses accept and to those you talk. All is a maze, what makes it so interesting, to solve, even if it's not possible... I think science never ends, because it's mankind who is curious for more.... always. Nice piece my friend

E.L.

[Pax]

such a pleasure hearing your thoughts my dearest friend... and its also a treasure like everyone else had given me in this poem...

Its like an infinite cycle of a crazy puzzle... guess everyone holds every piece of the puzzle we just have to find it within our soul...

yes, human nature can be predictable but often times its not... its just like a maze with a lot of pathways...

i guess science will never end but i guess science will find its own demise, still we will never know...only the future can tell...

thank you again my friend...

Interesting isn't it? :) you're so welcome dear friend!!

[Pax]

yes indeed....so much...that i often wonder and ponder every time i read this...Life is indeed intriguing...

It is... I can't think sometimes very long too, I make myself tired, and I get over my sleep... frustrating. I guess my brain always wants to know every finesse of things... lol x

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[Pax]

typo...hehe...i've read one of your conversation with mr.Mark about the confusing auto correct....and indeed i can totally relate...i get a lot of typo's because of the too many languages in our head....like the way life is frustrating at times like you said.... be we do learned to adapt...

Yes, I think the same about that fact.... without frustrations, we didn't wrote, and all was not so interesting ;) oh yes, I hate auto correct lol haha

[Pax]

typo *but we do learned to adapt....
frustrations is tiring us down...but its part of the balance of our nature...frustration is in the darker side and love is on the lighter side...

True! :) my friend I have to run, I go to the south today, I will hook up soon! take care and have a lovely day! x

[Pax]

be careful.. and be well...you too have a beautiful day ahead of u...

Thank you, I will be back late in the eve tonight, but then you sleep already so I say till tomorrow :) take care too,and be well...

[stars are far]

well im not too much on those stuff , im more into romance write .. but that was kinda interesting ...
i think that we as human can't solve the puzzle of this world.. because as much as we know as much as out technology reach there is no way that we can reach that phase of knowing everything ...
and i think that one day we will no more have technology and anything we will be back to old ages ... the age where we kill animal in the forest to eat and that time ...
i know i got too far by this ... by im just giving my opinion ..

[Pax]

:)
~ there is no fault in your view my friend... this work can be interpreted in so many ways.... so there is no right or wrong... and your right, the puzzle is too big for a man alone to solve the puzzle...everyone holds a tiny piece...

and yes, i think so too that technology will come to an end sometime in the future but what if mother nature is also gone with it or i guess we never know... the future is uncertain... thanks for giving your opinion...it also has great value...

[stars are far]

:)

[Amelie]

It all boils down to human consciousness, my friend. It is yet the hardest case to crack and it will just crack your head like a squirrel does to walnuts; lest we sink or swim. Your inquiries and suppositions are fine to be translated and encapsulated to a canvass of thoughts- and that is your writing. Keep it up, you'll get better because you have control over it, whilst the universe is too much for now for you to deal with.

[Pax]

thanks my friend...indeed the universe now is too much for my brain...just pondering its vast spaces.... your response it great...its very much appreciated...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

There is so much left unanswered... will we ever know? In our lifetime? This is perplexing in a multitude of ways... When you look at the big picture it is awe inspiring. We are a just a speck (if that) in what we know as the Galaxy... and do we truly know all there is to know about our own home (Earth).... there are creatures we have never laid eyes on, at the bottom of the deep blue Ocean...We are still digging the earth for clues to our own history.

We humans cannnot be that self-centered as to thing that we are the only ones...light years away...
This is an intriguing topic....Thank you for opening the discussion of your thoughts Pax.

[Pax]

i guess we will never know, our lifetime might be too short for it to cover it all... the superior picture is too vast for our mind to fully grasp... it's intriguing indeed....leaves you in pondering thought of more questions...

thank you so much ms. Robbie...you stir my mind with your responsive review....i really appreciate it...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's always a pleasure to read your work of art, and your thoughts... I will have something to ponder, indeed! Going to bed now... good night, my friend. :)

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Questions lead to more questions and to more questions to an inquisitive mind. A universe of thought to travel through. The other reviewers have made great points, I just add that this was a thought provoking piece for me. After reading I somehow feel better about not having the answers and rather thrilled at the ability to question. :)

[Pax]

i second your review my friend....totally agreeable...there is so much out there to question..and its indeed a thrilling journey..... thank you so much...

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

:)

[Rain]

Pax,
I have a Terminal Cancer(Pancreatic) so I hope your dream is fulfilled.(Although too late for me) No human being can comprehend a "trillion" light years. Man is real arrogant in this aspect. Even the Big Bang theory is often misunderstood. There could not have been a massive "Bang" because the elements you need for sound did not exist. We are constantly discovering things about our Universe that defies all our scientific knowledge. Still, I think man needs to keep trying to solve the mystery of life. A very thoughtful Piece.

[Pax]

thanks so much mr. Rain...I hope that you'll have more time to write and ponder your thoughts in paper....Im grateful with your review...yes the big bang...i dont fully grasp that idea...i guess it much more complex that everyone thought it is... and i think human nature come along...its part of us...a nature of seeking answers to the unknown...we are naturally curious beings....thanks again...

[Pritesh]

Universe is invincible !! U get proved by the above poetry.The single trace of truth and fact seems to be lost beneath the intractable mysteries and infinite probablities.good job...keep writing.....:-)

[Pax]

thank you...yes...the possible probabilities are just infinite...

[Baby Ricochet]

If there is life on other planets I just hope they got their s**t together better than we do.

[Pax]

:D
~hahaha... my mind is in mixture right now with your response my friend....i hope they do...but we never know right...great response...
thanks...

[NathanBlackie]

Mans most haunting questions that have the most complex answers were the first and most simple questions. one's we've thought about since we could think... I love picture this poem paints.

[Pax]

thank you...its like the infinity cycle of questions....i guess...