Life of the Entire Galaxy

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Life of the Entire Galaxy

a puzzle that needs to be solve that brings more confusion to the mind

 a math problem that seeks answers that brings more questions in the end

a riddle with twist and turns that brings more pathways with infinite possibilities

 

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:Authors Critical Thinking Notes:

There are pieces that brings out a much bigger puzzle, it’s an infinite phase that brings the unpredictability of the galaxy’s Life cycle, a tiny bit of fraction can lead to another superior picture.

 

you can never see what it seems to be

Man is trying to answers the cycle of life of the entire galaxy

Guessing that it’s too much information for man to take in his brain

But with the help of technology, maybe they can

I’m not a scientist, I’m not philosopher yet

But wishing I am

Dreams are free

Thinking big made you lost the grasp of reality

Just don’t forget yourself

To step in your ground

Find your balance

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Author's Note

just authors note:
I guess before i really want to be a scientist to solve the mysteries of cancer cell for the fact that my mother died because of it. A philosopher it didn't comes to mind, still I’m not sure I can for the fact that I’m not intelligent to be one, I just want to reflect on things fascinating to me, maybe I'm just a thinker Like my friend said Mr. Sami...maybe his right sometimes i got lost of realities time when i think deep, swimming in the depths of information in my head, imagining the things i want, what will i do, a lot of what if this and that, or thinking the simple things in my simple minded ways…

actually the first special three lines above are for human nature but then again, sometime i said to myself that human nature can be predictable, and this is something much bigger than man itself...

I want to thank ms. corset and mr. sami for a contribution on this write...


please tell me what you think, I need feedback….it’s either I’m wrong or I’m right…you judge…

Reviews

[Caradoc]

I think that only together can mankind discover the answers to our most daunting questions. Only as one people will it be possible to overcome all obstacles. Until humanity manages to see beyond its petty prejudices, the truths we seek will always elude us. Our questions will frustrate us, the answers will only continue to spawn more questions, and the puzzle pieces will remain scattered, the picture fragmented.

It's why I place a high value on poetry and other written works. Every person, no matter how skilled and talented or even untalented and unskilled, holds a piece of the puzzle. They see a piece of the bigger picture, even if it's only a tiny section. Without them and what they perceive we will be lost. All poetry is art, and art is a reflection of the soul and a key to understanding the questions we all ask ourselves.

If you have not already heard the song, "The Humbling River" by the group Puscifer, I invite you to do so. It is a strong expression of my thoughts on the subject.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts my friend. You are already a philosopher.

Be well.

-Caradoc

[Pax]

~my friend i treasure your feedback like everyone else had given me... you see something that sometimes i don't see sometimes... i value your response...thank you so much...
i will listen to the song later...

[Lover Of Words]

Nicely put Pax
Nicely done

[Pax]

thank you my friend.

[An owl on the moon]

So profoundly moving... the journey of the vast universe... the journey into the intimacy of each of us... Powerful!

[Pax]

Thank you...its such a pleasure hearing your thoughts mr. Craig...and yes its indeed a journey of information in the vast universe...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

wonderful piece, of course you are a dreamer and a deep thinker, that is the way of us poets.

[Pax]

thank you ms. Neva...its a pleasure hearing that... I am a dreamer like everyone of us here...

[Rorenzu]

This is actually the first poem I read on this site... And this will serve as my inspiration to do better if not, best on my writings :)

[Pax]

wow, thank you...I'm honored by that...

[Barbara Walker]

And what will we do when we have explained EVERYTHING? How bored we will be! sometimes I think some things should be left a mystery!

[Pax]

Aha! yeah indeed, without nothing to explore is not challenging anymore...that makes it life is indeed a challenge...thank you so much my friend...your response is surprising...

[James William Dyer]

I hope you can figure a way to destroy the cancer cell. Oncologists should be more appreciated. My FatHeR (dirty) DIED of metastatic melanoma. My hopes go out to you. At first I wanted to tell you to change those plus signs, the three of them descending, into asterisks becayuse they would look like stars and your poem mentions the galaxy, but then I thought of the medical cross that represents healing. As a species, we'll get the, man, we will. Technology can help but will never replace human inginuity. And if it does, I'll be the first person casting the robots out to drink from seperate drinking fountains. aN ABOMINATION TO REPLACE HUMAN THOUGHT WITH a machine lol.....I'M DRunk i cant re-type those capitals

[Pax]

:D
~ no problem my friend...and i understand your viewpoint about machine...yes indeed its horrible when a machine comes to think its own, make choice without human knowledge and lastly destroy its creator like in the movies...very horrible to think about... the plus signs can be anything the reader interpret...its part of the poem itself...thank you so much for your feedback my friend...its pleasure hearing your thoughts...

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

I believe that you are right and I see all these questions and puzzles intriguing as I've come to ask lots of things as a child. I believe we ask question because we KNOW the answer is there somewhere, we know it. We just have to find it. That eventually results in us dousing ourselves in endless ways to answer it.

I see and like the relation there. Riddles are endless, we answer then we create another just in a moment. Like galaxies that every passing moment there is and will always be a galaxy forming.

You have brought these endless thoughts in a poetic embodiment and I thank you for that :)

Nice write, library :D

[Pax]

I'm really glad hearing your thoughts about this...it's much of a riddles that has infinite answers with different possibilities... its just endless that our mind can't fully grasp....thank you so much kabayan...

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Always happy to please :D hahaha you're welcome :3

[Arun Paul Kapur]

I was so drawn into this ! Wow .

[Pax]

thanks....I'm really glad you liked it...

[Arun Paul Kapur]

Take some time to see my own pieces of work if you will :)

[TTBoy28]

Puzzles, math problems, and riddles: All equations that make up the universe. This surely reminds me of "Close Encounters of the Third Kind." Everything is about communication and vibration which are all parts of energy. You made me think about this one, Pax! This would make a great college paper! "Find Your Balance!" Most definitely! If we are balanced, centered, we cannot be deterred, but we can lead others. Very Nice, Pax!

[Pax]

thank you so much my friend... its means a lot to hear your thoughts about this work.... college paper i never made one maybe because I never explore writing before...and now I'm glad i did....thanks again...

[TTBoy28]

My pleasure!

[Belle]

Well, just to let you know that here I am again reading this
and pondering your strong points. You know exactly my thought
about this as like the conversation even brought us to Plato and
Aristotle's works so I can not say furthermore but this piece
is really attention driver.

[Pax]

thanks kabayan....and i treasure your insights about it....