single doses

the main quote in the excessivenes of human nature...

 

Everything in Excess is poisonous

addiction starts off in single doses

until completely indulging…

Author's Note

i guess this will be main point of the mini booklet of mine...
here is a link: Excessiveness of Human Nature
hope you like it..

I may be wrong or not...it depends on how you understand...

Reviews

[Mia]

I completely agree with you! However, addiction is not always a bad thing. I’m addicted to love…I have to have it, all the time and I have to give it all the time. Addiction has such a negative connotation and it’s understandable. Many people have suffered as a result of some addiction. I refuse to see it as a negative, the only addiction I want in my life is the good kind :D
Thanks for sharing my friend.

[Pax]

i guess this poem i give 'addiction' a negative connotation because it is indeed dark for me in terms of addicting things... for i believe everything comes in moderate dosage.. too much is getting greedy...but it terms of love like you say..I believed it is also moderate for i think something you two both love, something you two both share, you give and take, both give space, there is trust...love isn't selfish, love isn't greedy... love gives way even you end up hurting... if your addicted to love is it something that you want all the love you can get...is that greedy or i just think it is....its just my thoughts my friend...I'm not sure i answered your question...
thanks again for a thought-provoking response...

[Pax]

now i got your point my friend Mia...thanks to Mr. James review...

[Mia]

I value your opinions my friend and even if they are not the same as mine, please, do not hesitate to share them. That's what makes life o interesting. Thank you for trying to see my point and thank you for sharing yours. You're very welcome :D

[Pax]

thanks my dearest friend, yes i was a bit worried at first because I'm always careful not to offend anyone...

I really got your poit my friend, but then again... the heart know the bouderies of its love...the heart knows how to balance between things it love...like i said to aleysha below...there is a fine balance between things that we need...in which moderations comes along...

thanks again for listening...

[Pax]

typo again *point*

[Mia]

I see what you're saying and reading Caradoc's review made me see your perspective better. Too much of a good thing can indeed make you take that thing for granted. You are welcome :) this has given me a lot to think about and for that I thank you :D

[Michael G.]

Strong and probably true statement of fact, Pax.

[Pax]

Thanks Mr. Michael...yup i do believe its true..

[FJ Davis]

Addiction begins with single doses and ends up being almost constant dosage.
Your poem, your message, are both extremely worthwhile, Pax!

[Pax]

wow, thank you Mr. Frank its such a high praise coming from you...im really grateful...

[Sami Khalil]

Words of truth and wisdom. Drops cause a ripple. Journeys start with one step . Here is to addiction and probably death.

[Pax]

wow, now that's a deep response mr. Sami...thanks you so much...

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you you. You are welcome Mr. Pax

[afra]

short but beautiful ...i love it

[Pax]

Thanks Afra...

[NathanBlackie]

I like it, Cautionary tale stripped to the bones.

[Pax]

amazing view my friend...thank you...