single doses

single doses

A Chapter by Pax
"

the main quote in the excessivenes of human nature...

"

 

Everything in Excess is poisonous

addiction starts off in single doses

until completely indulging…



© 2013 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
i guess this will be main point of the mini booklet of mine...
here is a link: Excessiveness of Human Nature
hope you like it..

I may be wrong or not...it depends on how you understand...

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Mia
I completely agree with you! However, addiction is not always a bad thing. I’m addicted to love…I have to have it, all the time and I have to give it all the time. Addiction has such a negative connotation and it’s understandable. Many people have suffered as a result of some addiction. I refuse to see it as a negative, the only addiction I want in my life is the good kind :D
Thanks for sharing my friend.


Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

typo again *point*
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Mia

12 Years Ago

I see what you're saying and reading Caradoc's review made me see your perspective better. Too much .. read more



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exactly, buddy! This is why you can't just say, "eh, once won't hurt..." because it will. I completely agree.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

I totally agree....thanks my friend...
Take a small taste to begin addiction. I like this poem. Easy to be overcome with desire for many things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

thank you my friend....
Indeed. Everything should be taken in moderation. You Can have too much of a good thing. It can cause you to begin to take that good thing for granted, and then, you don't fully appreciate it. If that continues on for too long, you can can end up losing that good thing you enjoyed so much.

And then the real pain begins.

A nice statement my friend. Truth may be subjective, but I think this is concrete, worth being written in stone.

-Caradoc

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

wow, that's great to hear my friend.... i fear i maybe wrong...but truth is really subjective. many .. read more
Caradoc

12 Years Ago

Well the thing about finding out you're wrong is that now you know where to put your feet.
read more
This is ever so true!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

thank you so much...
Your viewpoint on the subject intrigues me.
Though, what about the over indulgence of happiness, or positivity?


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AleyshaRosa

12 Years Ago

Good comeback
No problem, I love talking out subjects like this =D
Pax

12 Years Ago

hope i answered your question...
AleyshaRosa

12 Years Ago

Indeed you did =]
well the word excess MEANS too much, does it not?....So it cannot be good for anyone

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Pax

12 Years Ago

excess can be good or bad depends on the situation...but the key to me is moderation...maybe too muc.. read more
You're right. I believe nothing on this earth is bad if put to the right use and in the proper dosege...but that too much of anything is bad...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

yes moderation is the key...thanks Marie...
i agree with you..

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Pax

12 Years Ago

thank you my friend...
stars are far

12 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
I like this short blurb you have created, and in a way it's very truthful. Addiction, though, is not necessarily negative. It can be an addiction to something benign or beneficial, say an addiction to literature. Although the word itself does imply negativity, for the most part there is nothing wrong with someone having an addiction. I manage several at once. I like how you end this poem in ellipsis, and I'm still trying to decide weather I'd want to see more here or if it's better being brief as it stands


Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

Now I understand Mia's point...at the same time you got my point too...addiction implies negativity .. read more
Very true Mr PAX. Outstanding job

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Pax

12 Years Ago

Thanks my friend...I'm grateful with your review...

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