single doses

single doses

A Chapter by Pax
"

the main quote in the excessivenes of human nature...

"

 

Everything in Excess is poisonous

addiction starts off in single doses

until completely indulging…



© 2013 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
i guess this will be main point of the mini booklet of mine...
here is a link: Excessiveness of Human Nature
hope you like it..

I may be wrong or not...it depends on how you understand...

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Mia
I completely agree with you! However, addiction is not always a bad thing. I’m addicted to love…I have to have it, all the time and I have to give it all the time. Addiction has such a negative connotation and it’s understandable. Many people have suffered as a result of some addiction. I refuse to see it as a negative, the only addiction I want in my life is the good kind :D
Thanks for sharing my friend.


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Pax

12 Years Ago

typo again *point*
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Mia

12 Years Ago

I see what you're saying and reading Caradoc's review made me see your perspective better. Too much .. read more



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Totally agree. It sounds trite, but moderation is always best. Over indulgence is the down fall of many, including myself. Short, but very meaningful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

I'm really glad you've enjoyed my poems....mr. Rain...it brings so much pleasure...I'm not sure it c.. read more
Pax

12 Years Ago

:) i appreciate your reviews so much mr. Rain...it bring pleasure fuel to write more....thank you...
I have to say that I completely agree with you in what you are expressing here. We are an addictive society, needing more and more and can't see that our indulging smothering. WELL DONE

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

thanks you so much my friend...
I really like this poem of yours, Pax! I do totally agree with you. We actually talked about binge drinking and addictions last week in Drivers' Ed. I think it's a bad thing and if you don't start drinking then you don't have a problem to worry about period. Right? I know some fellow classmates or even children younger than me that drinks or does harmful stuff to their bodies. I wonder and wonder what kind of world have we come to? A horrible one at that! I read the reviews and comments below before reviewing myself. I do think "love" itself can be a bad addiction sometimes, too! Yeah there's such thing as "good" kind of love addiction. But that's hard to find. Some people get so stuck in their own world of love with their girlfriend/boyfriend and forget the most important people in their life. Thank you for sharing such a powerful poem, Pax!! :D

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

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Pax

12 Years Ago

thanks for a another in-depth review my friend... indeed your right...yet the key to everything is m.. read more
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

12 Years Ago

You're welcome, truly. Your writing deserves bunches of meaningful reviews, Pax! :)
Agreed ! That is going to be a very long book if you are covering human nature lol

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Pax

12 Years Ago

hahaha....lol..i agree... there are too much to cover...some i don't know yet....thank you my friend.. read more
Very true indeed. Short, sweet, and to the point. You've mastered this style of poetic diction very well. Great write. :)

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Pax

12 Years Ago

thank you my friend... its such a pleasure to hear your thoughts about it...
oh..I dunno Paxie (lol, sorry I couldn't resist ) can one have too many Cheetos? yes? oh bummer, I suppose this can be true and definitely true with addictive substances

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Pax

12 Years Ago

lol....you remember the name....hahaha...no probs...so made me ..*smiles*... oh i would love some ch.. read more
deep and direct to the point. Great quote!!!

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Pax

12 Years Ago

thanks Cap...
so short but directly to the point. i have really enjoyed it..

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Pax

12 Years Ago

thank you Khalid....
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Beautifully done :)

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Pax

12 Years Ago

thank you mr. Cord...
Hm I remember the first line. :P
Another good one from you! :)

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Pax

12 Years Ago

;) now you remind me of something....thank you ms. Belle

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