single doses
A Chapter by Pax
the main quote in the excessivenes of human nature...
Everything in Excess is
poisonous
addiction starts off in
single doses
until completely
indulging…
© 2013 Pax
Author's Note
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i guess this will be main point of the mini booklet of mine...
here is a link: Excessiveness of Human Nature
hope you like it..
I may be wrong or not...it depends on how you understand...
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Featured Review
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I completely agree with you! However, addiction is not always a bad thing. I’m addicted to love…I have to have it, all the time and I have to give it all the time. Addiction has such a negative connotation and it’s understandable. Many people have suffered as a result of some addiction. I refuse to see it as a negative, the only addiction I want in my life is the good kind :D
Thanks for sharing my friend.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
i guess this poem i give 'addiction' a negative connotation because it is indeed dark for me in term.. read morei guess this poem i give 'addiction' a negative connotation because it is indeed dark for me in terms of addicting things... for i believe everything comes in moderate dosage.. too much is getting greedy...but it terms of love like you say..I believed it is also moderate for i think something you two both love, something you two both share, you give and take, both give space, there is trust...love isn't selfish, love isn't greedy... love gives way even you end up hurting... if your addicted to love is it something that you want all the love you can get...is that greedy or i just think it is....its just my thoughts my friend...I'm not sure i answered your question...
thanks again for a thought-provoking response...
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12 Years Ago
now i got your point my friend Mia...thanks to Mr. James review...
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12 Years Ago
I value your opinions my friend and even if they are not the same as mine, please, do not hesitate t.. read moreI value your opinions my friend and even if they are not the same as mine, please, do not hesitate to share them. That's what makes life o interesting. Thank you for trying to see my point and thank you for sharing yours. You're very welcome :D
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12 Years Ago
thanks my dearest friend, yes i was a bit worried at first because I'm always careful not to offend .. read morethanks my dearest friend, yes i was a bit worried at first because I'm always careful not to offend anyone...
I really got your poit my friend, but then again... the heart know the bouderies of its love...the heart knows how to balance between things it love...like i said to aleysha below...there is a fine balance between things that we need...in which moderations comes along...
thanks again for listening...
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12 Years Ago
typo again *point*
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12 Years Ago
I see what you're saying and reading Caradoc's review made me see your perspective better. Too much .. read moreI see what you're saying and reading Caradoc's review made me see your perspective better. Too much of a good thing can indeed make you take that thing for granted. You are welcome :) this has given me a lot to think about and for that I thank you :D
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
I'm really glad you've enjoyed my poems....mr. Rain...it brings so much pleasure...I'm not sure it c.. read moreI'm really glad you've enjoyed my poems....mr. Rain...it brings so much pleasure...I'm not sure it can be a poem but it is definitely a quote..
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12 Years Ago
:) i appreciate your reviews so much mr. Rain...it bring pleasure fuel to write more....thank you...
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
thanks you so much my friend...
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12 Years Ago
thanks for a another in-depth review my friend... indeed your right...yet the key to everything is m.. read morethanks for a another in-depth review my friend... indeed your right...yet the key to everything is moderation... yes drinking alcoholic is harmful if indulge daily...it good to drink it once in a while...and when you talk about the harmful stuff well...i could say don't try it if you can't handle...because addiction eats your soul... yes...when you talk about love..its has two faces...so i think your right...thanks u so much again...
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12 Years Ago
You're welcome, truly. Your writing deserves bunches of meaningful reviews, Pax! :)
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
hahaha....lol..i agree... there are too much to cover...some i don't know yet....thank you my friend.. read morehahaha....lol..i agree... there are too much to cover...some i don't know yet....thank you my friend...
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
thank you my friend... its such a pleasure to hear your thoughts about it...
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
lol....you remember the name....hahaha...no probs...so made me ..*smiles*... oh i would love some ch.. read morelol....you remember the name....hahaha...no probs...so made me ..*smiles*... oh i would love some cheetos... yet we know to well too much junk foods is not too good for the health... moderation is the key... ;)
thanks my friend..
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
thanks Cap...
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
thank you Khalid....
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12 Years Ago
thank you mr. Cord...
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12 Years Ago
;) now you remind me of something....thank you ms. Belle
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