single doses

the main quote in the excessivenes of human nature...

 

Everything in Excess is poisonous

addiction starts off in single doses

until completely indulging…

Author's Note

i guess this will be main point of the mini booklet of mine...
here is a link: Excessiveness of Human Nature
hope you like it..

I may be wrong or not...it depends on how you understand...

Reviews

[Mia]

I completely agree with you! However, addiction is not always a bad thing. I’m addicted to love…I have to have it, all the time and I have to give it all the time. Addiction has such a negative connotation and it’s understandable. Many people have suffered as a result of some addiction. I refuse to see it as a negative, the only addiction I want in my life is the good kind :D
Thanks for sharing my friend.

[Pax]

i guess this poem i give 'addiction' a negative connotation because it is indeed dark for me in terms of addicting things... for i believe everything comes in moderate dosage.. too much is getting greedy...but it terms of love like you say..I believed it is also moderate for i think something you two both love, something you two both share, you give and take, both give space, there is trust...love isn't selfish, love isn't greedy... love gives way even you end up hurting... if your addicted to love is it something that you want all the love you can get...is that greedy or i just think it is....its just my thoughts my friend...I'm not sure i answered your question...
thanks again for a thought-provoking response...

[Pax]

now i got your point my friend Mia...thanks to Mr. James review...

[Mia]

I value your opinions my friend and even if they are not the same as mine, please, do not hesitate to share them. That's what makes life o interesting. Thank you for trying to see my point and thank you for sharing yours. You're very welcome :D

[Pax]

thanks my dearest friend, yes i was a bit worried at first because I'm always careful not to offend anyone...

I really got your poit my friend, but then again... the heart know the bouderies of its love...the heart knows how to balance between things it love...like i said to aleysha below...there is a fine balance between things that we need...in which moderations comes along...

thanks again for listening...

[Pax]

typo again *point*

[Mia]

I see what you're saying and reading Caradoc's review made me see your perspective better. Too much of a good thing can indeed make you take that thing for granted. You are welcome :) this has given me a lot to think about and for that I thank you :D

[Marie]

That's very true.

[ewest1220]

I agree with you completely. Is the booklet for anything in particular or just some good writing with a message?

[Pax]

what you do mean anything particular, particular on what?
i guess this writting is all about the message it can brought to the readers...
oh, thank you for the visit and review my friend...
its so nice to see you around again :)

[ewest1220]

Thanks :) It's been quite awhile since I've been on this site I'm glad to be back. Sounds like I'll need to read the booklet :)

[Pax]

anytime when your free my friend...
the booklet is just short and still pending..
I only tackle 3 human nature i stumble upon....
someday in time I'll be able to continue...

[ewest1220]

Well let me know when you continue! Read requests may or may not be on. (When I turn them on I get 100 in one day) but message me if you can't get a read request through I'll check out the new stuff!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very good thought and point! yes, you are right, just for me all starts from the second time, and addiction will come after that "surely". If you made something for first time, it could be just by chance, but if u made it second, almost certainly you`ll continue. But on the whole all addictions start from just allowing yourself to be close to it...thank you for making me think :)
No♥r

[Pax]

your insightful my friend and you understand the whole thing... thank you so much dear friend. be blessed as always.

[CHRIS ANDES]

..witty
=]

[Pax]

thank you kabayan...

[Ees]

Wonderful and truthful poetry.
It is something I say often: Moderation is alright. Too much of anything is just plain too much... I don't usually think of how that might slide into addiction... But this time I did, because you wrote that for me there. Hahah. Anyway wonderful work, great job.

[Pax]

*smiling* i wrote it as a reminder of me and for everyone who reads it... :)
I'm greatful with your presence here...thank you...

[Ees]

no problem.

[Damien Davison]

Too much of anything is bad for someone... I my point of view anyway. We find something that makes us feel good and we keep pushing and pushing...

[Pax]

very true mr. D... i like your viewpoint. thank you so much...

[KAOlmsted]

Basic needs: Food--too much food and we become morbidly obese and we die; Shelter--too much house and we live beyond our means, the mortgage turns upside down, we are homeless and we die; Water--too much water and we suffer water intoxication or we drown and we die...you're right...everything in excess is poisonous. Moderation, baby, moderation.

Addiction is a predisposed condition. A single dose triggers that condition. If you have an addictive personality, that single dose is all it takes; if you don't, well...lucky you...you won't get caught up in the consuming indulgence...

Truly inspired piece, Pax...made me think. I love that.

-kimmer

[Pax]

~~ Kimmer your visit it’s always a pleasure, your view on the subject matter is refreshing… I can say now that this simple quote is quite universal on things and situation… like the key to all is moderation ….
“Moderation, baby, moderation.” ~ this state made me smile… 
I learned an insightful review…so thank you so much!!!

[KAOlmsted]

Always my pleasure, Pax...

[Jade]

I agree with you, even love which we become addicited to can be poisonous, think of the darker side to love. Maybe you should write something on that subject, just an idea

[Pax]

i guess i did... its part of jealousy..its the in the first chapter of my booklet...you can click on it in the authors note... thank you for giving your feedback its very much appreciated...

[Rhianne Ney]

It's correct for us teenagers who sometimes tend to just try everything new to our eyes just to satisfy curiosity...

[Pax]

thank you kabayan....
yes curiosity takes its toll, but we all learned...

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right, I'm too curious also but I avoid being too inquisitive

[reflectingus]

I completely agree with you. Even too much of good leads to bad eventually. The world is designed in such a way that you can never have excess of anything. These words have this warning aura to it that is just captivates and leaves you wanting to find out the story behind this. But grammar-wise, shouldn't it be 'addiction starts off"?
Keep writing :)

[Pax]

aha...yes i did put it...now that you clarify it...i will change it back...i was confused about it last time...

[Pax]

and thanks my friend...