dark begginings...

i was thinking of holloween...and i came up with this...a weird poem...

Why do I knew from this day forward that I’ll be alone as the dark corners inside my weird mind… will the dead dreams rise up… or will the leeches of sorrow comes up and eat this dying soul… the monstrous being growing inside… who’d knew that this creature will tear up my reality and concealed me to be preserved… will I ever break free from this chained reality... maybe not… do you mind… I needed space inside your corners and sleep… I just needed rest in this miserable dimension away from the creature that hunts my mortal being… do you know the mind is a creepy thing to play with… I know… so be careful my friend… Would you not mind me staying here for a while… it won’t be long… just a few minutes is enough for me to rest… I’m tired… wake me up after five minutes… then I’ll be gone…

Reviews

[Kuhr Gred]

wow.. your font shows the darkness of your poem.. haha :) thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

[Pax]

thanks Kuhr...

[Marie]

There is a darkness within a darkness in the mind...a thing that creeps and will not be satisfied...

[Pax]

true marie...i do believe they just wait at see in the far corners of the mind...thanks...

[An owl on the moon]

There is that movement over the mind, like the darkness and shadows that come alive in autumn. Powerful and profound in the life of longing.

[Pax]

your a great light mr. Craig....you see something that i sometimes hide...thank you....

[Baby Ricochet]

"The Leeches of Sorrow" That's awesome. Great write Mr Pax

[Pax]

thanks my friend for visiting...it's a pleasure seeing you around...

[Lost in Wonderland]

very interesting poem with a tone of confusion and fuzzieness (but its a good thing since i feel like that's how the narrarator is feeling) Anyways Nice job, very unique:)

[Pax]

i find it really weird actually...like this person has multiple personality...

[Lost in Wonderland]

hm, that just adds more to the mystery and intrigue of it:)

[Pax]

thank you...your thoughts are quite enough for me to keep on writing...

[Lost in Wonderland]

no problem