Contentment’s path

~~~~~a short poem for everyone's purpose...i guess..not sure so tell me your thoughts

 

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The fringes of fate frozen my fingers upon reaching you

 

………But destiny’s hands are within my grasp…

 

Then I used my mind’s free will to take hold of it and reach you

 

* Together I’ve achieved fulfilling joy with you at my side

 

.....…towards a journey to Contentment’s path…

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Author's Note

yehey...not a sad poem..or its not something sad...this is something good i guess..

Reviews

[Caradoc]

It's hopeful with just a tinge of...darkness. I like it because it is so real to me. It has a message, to strive to overcome whatever bonds "fate" might lay on you. There is fate, yes, a unique end to which we all journey, but within the wheels of that destiny, our free will lets us forge the road that takes us there. And for the few, even strive to alter that end.

That's what I get from this piece. It might not have been what you saw when you wrote it, but it is what I see when I read it. And therein lies the beauty of ultimate purpose of every art the world over.

Thanks for this.

[Wakeofahero]

A very peaceful poem indeed. Very well written, nice job, it defiantly does make you happy to read this!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

So glad to read something uplifting!...The format is creative... I'm not sure how I feel about the blocked colors though. However, the piece itself makes me smile. Thank you for sharing this. :)