Contentment’s path

~~~~~a short poem for everyone's purpose...i guess..not sure so tell me your thoughts

 

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The fringes of fate frozen my fingers upon reaching you

 

………But destiny’s hands are within my grasp…

 

Then I used my mind’s free will to take hold of it and reach you

 

* Together I’ve achieved fulfilling joy with you at my side

 

.....…towards a journey to Contentment’s path…

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Author's Note

yehey...not a sad poem..or its not something sad...this is something good i guess..

Reviews

[Caradoc]

It's hopeful with just a tinge of...darkness. I like it because it is so real to me. It has a message, to strive to overcome whatever bonds "fate" might lay on you. There is fate, yes, a unique end to which we all journey, but within the wheels of that destiny, our free will lets us forge the road that takes us there. And for the few, even strive to alter that end.

That's what I get from this piece. It might not have been what you saw when you wrote it, but it is what I see when I read it. And therein lies the beauty of ultimate purpose of every art the world over.

Thanks for this.

[Barbara Walker]

Together, I'VE ACHIEVED not ACHIEVE. IT'S WRITING THAT EXPRESSES YOUR EMOTIONS, NOTHING WRONG WITH THAT!

[Pax]

oh, I didn't noticed that...I always appreciate you reviews...many thanks...

[Corset]

I like all the busy colorful font that lends emphasis on the key ideas, I think i'm going to try that soon too :) It's a great expression Sir Will :)

[Pax]

thanks....try it...I'll be waiting to read it...

[RachelReaper]

I Love the format and the different colors you used in this to make it "pop", and the fact that this is a happy poem :) Yay for happy poetry!!!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Great job willyam. I love the layout

[Sami Khalil]

A journey of poetic excellence... Thank you for innovating...

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

You guess right, Very nice indeed. Highlighting your free will to chose or not chose. To often we allow fear to take the very best opportunities and then wonder why nothing good ever happens to us. Glad to see you are braver than most. Nicely done

[Pax]

thank you,your thoughts are very much appreciated.

[Mia]

"...towards a journey to Contentment's path..." I love that. Something good is right and you told me you had writers block...ha! Wonderful creative work!

[Pax]

:) yes, I do from time to time...I guess coping up with inspiration is a race...somtimes I just manage to keep up but then...again...it runs faster than me... thank you my friend..

[Mia]

Well I'm glad you stay in the race! It's always a pleasure!

[Marie]

This is really something good...your use of colours and fonts is very effective.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Very creative :)

[That_Girl]

It's a poem filled with contentment... it's serene. I love it!