Contentment’s path

~~~~~a short poem for everyone's purpose...i guess..not sure so tell me your thoughts

 

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The fringes of fate frozen my fingers upon reaching you

 

………But destiny’s hands are within my grasp…

 

Then I used my mind’s free will to take hold of it and reach you

 

* Together I’ve achieved fulfilling joy with you at my side

 

.....…towards a journey to Contentment’s path…

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Author's Note

yehey...not a sad poem..or its not something sad...this is something good i guess..

Reviews

[Caradoc]

It's hopeful with just a tinge of...darkness. I like it because it is so real to me. It has a message, to strive to overcome whatever bonds "fate" might lay on you. There is fate, yes, a unique end to which we all journey, but within the wheels of that destiny, our free will lets us forge the road that takes us there. And for the few, even strive to alter that end.

That's what I get from this piece. It might not have been what you saw when you wrote it, but it is what I see when I read it. And therein lies the beauty of ultimate purpose of every art the world over.

Thanks for this.

[lee von cleef]

To breath with , to breath through, yours or a partners , Soul. Lights a shared trail for us on the dark side of the world. thank you for the light.

Very uplifting and loved the way you did this set up, to merge the colors even into a little free poem, thank you for this one my friend.

E.L.

[B-poet]

I like the overall message of this poem, reach one, teach one then both of you can fullfill each others contentments. The coloful diction displayed makes it even more emphatic. Great write :)

[mandy]

very nice!!

[Ruth]

Really like this and the highlighted words could indeed be a piece of prose unto themselves :)
xoxo

[MOON]

Excellent Willyam thats what it is i guess a journey to peace of mind and contentment. Love the way you presented this write. Lovely

[Jamal]

hey dude, sorry i was so scarce, school has restarted so i was a bit pre-occupied anyways i'm glad i found time to come back and comment on a well written poem. atleast it's not a tearjerker this time lol

[Pax]

no problem my friend...it's always a pleasure to hear from you...Glad your back..

[Heather]

I liked how it could be two poems in one. If i read the highlighted words together it is a poem in itself. I liked this, it was uplifting and creative.

[kublakhan27]

I like this...nice work^^