wounds of my past

hopeful fellow...

The wounds of my past

lingering and wondering

through the days of my life

then you came along

and heal this dying soul

This magic coated masked melted like candles.

Your resonated flames made it into liquid nitrogen.

Making it unattainable

For me to grasp and hold into

It evaporated in the sun kissed skies.

My black salted tears evaporated

By your brightly warm glow.

I feel alive and free

The wounds faded into scars

Leaving a mark of lamented past

Reminding me that I’ve learned

I came back to this wondrous existence with you at my side

I bid farewell to the dying lands of grief

And promise not come back

As long as your light and wisdom shines on me

Never fading

Reviews

[MOON]

Lovely write from dark to light walking in loves embrace and healing the wounds the scars a badge of honour for growth. Beautifully expressed .

[Pax]

thanks for visiting moon, its always a pleasure to see you around and reading my work...

[~]

Great word play in this, Willyam. I like the reference to liquid nitrogen and black salted tears very much. Scars are reminders of what we survive. The pain of the wound may be gone but we will always remember how we got it. They are to be worn with pride. Love heals all wounds, right? Well penned, poet.

[Pax]

yes, i believed on that sayings..thanks my friend.

[natzky]

i too can relate with this poem...lols...anyhow, thanks for sharing this wonderful and very inspiring poem...:)

[Pax]

thank you my friend.

[Pax]

I feel you Willyam, I have gone through this too...
I adore how you change the situation into bliss here.
It's a gift, a sign, you're so strong my dear.
I admire the power of positivism you came up with.
We all are in life to learn, and to make the best
out of it, sometimes, it goes well, other times it suck lol
But we have eachother as friends, to kick eachothers asses,
to get on that top of luck alright... wonderful words dear friend
I am always loving your honesty and brilliant words.

E.L.

[Pax]

thank you dear friend..i always gives me pleasure to read you review...its a pleasure to be you friend...

*smiles*

[asdarkeyesclose]

'I came back to this wondrous existence with you at my side
I bid farewell to the dying lands of grief'

this is very moving Mr WillyamPax. you took me on an emotional journey and i was left full of hope for the future. such is love. fantastic.

[Pax]

thank you my friend..its a wondrous journey...

[Caradoc]

I love this one. You go from haunted, dwelling on past wounds to alive and free, walking into sunlight with someone who healed you. It's really quite beautiful. The last four lines are my favorite, they're so hopeful.

It reminds me of the poetry I've written for my Sapphire.

Excellent work my friend.

-Caradoc

[Pax]

Thanks my friend. If you send me read request on that poem i would gladly read it....

[Caradoc]

You're most welcome and thank you.

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful

[Pax]

thank you my friend, its great to see your review. Simple and meaningful.

[MoriartyMesa]

My black salted tears evaporated

By your brightly warm glow.

I feel alive and free




Now those are words that give hope and breath of life.

[Pax]

Yes, I love those lines...too..and i can relate to it very well..thanks my friend.

[MusicLover]

This poem is amazing. Keep up the amazing work

[Pax]

Thanks my friend. I appreciate you reading my work.

[MusicLover]

its no problem. :D Smile.......... it makes people wonder what your up to