Some people believe darkness is to be brought out into the light and dispelled.
A process often referred to as "confession."
Entertaining or "playing with" darkness (of certain types) can be disastrous.
Perhaps, you're talking about a presence that is not, at first, fully recognized.
In any event, Will, this piece is a bit mysterious, sounds ominous and is obviously thought-provoking.
Very fine work!
anything that's dark, dark thoughts is one of them..some do it and made it into reality..then there .. read moreanything that's dark, dark thoughts is one of them..some do it and made it into reality..then there comes stealing, rape, harassment, and even to kill...its really deep...
12 Years Ago
oh... that's right, every one have darkness good one. please keep writing (:
Brilliant thought, at this time I cannot finish my own. I understand, yet the words are stuck in limbo.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
thanks my friend, did you mean that the poem is stuck in the limbo of thoughts?
12 Years Ago
No, my words to express are stuck in limbo. I understand the poem, but this early in the morning I c.. read moreNo, my words to express are stuck in limbo. I understand the poem, but this early in the morning I can't find the words.
12 Years Ago
oh, i see. Just relax feel your surroundings..your thoughts will flow just like water..
12 Years Ago
Thank you, perhaps a cup of coffee will help as well
12 Years Ago
yeah..me 2..a cup of coffee in the morning completes my day..
12 Years Ago
O.o Why must you mention coffee? Now I want some...
Indeed. I believe that we all have our own darkness lurking within. It waits where the light cannot reach, or hides at the edges of our consciousness. Our darkness is there, even in our shadows. Those who right are the ones that are able to conquer, if for only a moment, their own darkness.
This is a good poem. In the end, I think we all have to make peace with our darkness. Because even though the light may may fade, the darkness never dies.
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I am Willyam Pax from the Philippines and now residing here in Saudi Arabia for work. I am not a writer but a sensitive aspiring artist who expresses himself into .. more..