Darkened Soul

a little dark..

In my darkest days, I held you beneath my warmth

You indulged me with your feverish hunger

You embraced me with your piercing emotions

You were immune to my changeable disease

I came to a realization that you were my muse

              The best rainbow I received……….

You told me that I was part of your soul

            To me you’re the fuel to my rusty engine,

                                     The energy to my thirsty being,

                         And the light of my darkened soul.

Author's Note

i don't know what to say...
would you share your thoughts about it?

Reviews

[Mia]

This is wonderful! I love the ending!
"The energy to my thirsty being,
And the light of my darken soul."
It is very evident that there is passion in this relationship and it's the kind of passion that just engulfs you. The kind of passion that’s dangerous but you just can't help yourself. Really great write!

[Pax]

You got it! that was the purpose and the dark side of it. Somewhat a dangerous love affair. Thank you my friend.

[Mia]

It's such a pleasure!

[Corset]

it's glorious Sir Willyam, so many lines of depth , of love, of realization and actualization, all are an unwinding story of meaning and inspirational thought. I enjoyed them all.

[Pax]

I'm quite honored with the praise. thank you so much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem dear poet with beautiful lines...
I like the most:
The best rainbow I received.
the light of my darkened soul...
And others...

[Pax]

I'm really glad you liked it Mr. Sami. Thanks

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

A very intensely romantic love poem - and the muse I suppose said "yes".

[Pax]

Salamat po nang marami...sana.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I had a muse like this at one time.......thus the reason for so many mushy romantic poems..but it was wonderful. Excellent write.

[Pax]

Thank you my friend for sharing. They do inspired us to write.

[Renée]

I like it..what was it that inspired the poem ?

[Pax]

i don't know it just come out in the moments of my bordom... :)
thanks my friend.

[MOON]

Beautiful pretty much all of it but I really love the last line... And the light of my darkened soul.

[Pax]

thank You, me too i love the last line.

[Caradoc]

I would have to say, even if your intention when writing this was something entirely different, I see this as a great love poem. It speaks of simple truths that the narrator feels to an unnamed someone. A person in love could read this and easily imagine these as the words spoke in their heart.

I know I did.

Thank you for sharing this.

-Caradoc

[Pax]

Wow, thanks.

[Caradoc]

You're most welcome. I'm planning on sharing this with my special someone.

Be well.

[Pax]

hope it goes well. thanks again.

[.]

Describing love is always difficult but when u read this it's much easier! 100/100 Loved it!

[Pax]

Yes, just listen to your heart and you'll know. Thanks

[.]

You're welcome! :)

[dark light]

I like this poem it's short and beautiful

[Pax]

thank You my friend.

[FJ Davis]

An excellent offering, Will!

[Pax]

Thanks Mr. frank, I wish she would love it.