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Revolving Theory

Revolving Theory

A Poem by Pax









Time is just an illusion

A manifestation of our creation

I often wonder the flip side of space dimension

The revolving theory of our imagination.

© 2012 Pax


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Pax
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I have so often had this thought myself, Willyam. Time, though concrete because we have made it so, it purely up to our own perception. We count based on the setting of the sun and the rise of the moon, but who is to say what time actually is? Time is relative. I love this. It is somewhere between poetry and science...which I suppose is the definition of imagination. Well done, my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Brandon S. Whitten

12 Years Ago

I prefer divine madness. 3 nuts from the same tree:)
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12 Years Ago

Little minions...divine madness.....I will accept either :)
Pax

12 Years Ago

divine madness... i also like it...



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I love it Willyam.

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Has a twilight feel to it. I really like this poem this.

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ooooh! I liked this!! The rhyming is really really great!! :D haha

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Cool poem. Reminds me of physics. I can't put pictures in my poems either

Posted 12 Years Ago


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you're a dirty little mind freaker, thats what you are, you freak my mind

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Mia
This is great friend! You're on a roll with amazing writing :)

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