Revolving Theory

Revolving Theory

A Poem by Pax









Time is just an illusion

A manifestation of our creation

I often wonder the flip side of space dimension

The revolving theory of our imagination.

© 2012 Pax


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I have so often had this thought myself, Willyam. Time, though concrete because we have made it so, it purely up to our own perception. We count based on the setting of the sun and the rise of the moon, but who is to say what time actually is? Time is relative. I love this. It is somewhere between poetry and science...which I suppose is the definition of imagination. Well done, my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Brandon S. Whitten

12 Years Ago

I prefer divine madness. 3 nuts from the same tree:)
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12 Years Ago

Little minions...divine madness.....I will accept either :)
Pax

12 Years Ago

divine madness... i also like it...


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This reminds me of that line from Poe's work.

"Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream."

You have a very thoughtful mind, always wondering, always questioning. I like that you share your thoughts on the questions you have with us. It makes for good poetry, among other things.

-Caradoc

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

you mean edgar allan poe? Thank you so much, you know me now so well by just reading my poems. Yes, .. read more
Caradoc

12 Years Ago

Yes Edgar Allen Poe. I like his work too.

And I think that's one of the best ways to wr.. read more
Pax

12 Years Ago

the sad thing is that i only read just one of his work the famous one, i must start some reading som.. read more
I guess curiosity is just part of human nature
and I'm enjoying it a lot
=]

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

salamat kaibigan
CHRIS ANDES

12 Years Ago

0h,walang anuman po
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So little words speak so much. This piece really brings out your imagination. Beautiful.

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Pax

12 Years Ago

thanks my friend. Its a wondering poem of our imagination and science.
Wow that is very deep Im impressed Simple yet divine

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Pax

12 Years Ago

Thanks Mr. Tate, Simplicity is beauty.
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Wow! Great poem! It really made me think... Great write, keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

Thanks ak.
AK

12 Years Ago

:)
my favorite thing I've ever read from you, my favorite piece of the week for sure. We think very simmilar I assume, the mix of science into our pieces, beautiful Will.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

thanks cole, yes i love science the theory of it makes my imagination runs, but the problem solving .. read more
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Loved the last sentence! Imagination and creativity always come first! 100/100

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I like this a lot.

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short but so big in your words nicely done

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For the most part, Will, quite profound.
Intriguing work!

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